It is a good story but hurts my head when the officer's are all referred to as policeman. In America where this story takes place we call them police officers. But otherwise a good story
The author screws up the timeline at every conceivable point that he could. Like there is this one war in the Spirit Realm that involved 100 races and I have no clue if it was a 1000 year war, a 100,000 year war or a 500,000 year war because the author can't get his facts straight. Within a span of 2 chapters, the facts of this war changed several times. There was just no effort whatsoever put into creating a plausible timeline of events. Also, there are mixes of multiple translators, so terminology often changes because the different translators want to call things by different names. There are many paragraphs that are incomplete as well. Most chapters have at least 1 or 2 paragraphs that just end halfway through a sentence, and a few times there was clearly important information missing that was extremely relevant to the plot.Also, I personally dislike the 3 heads and 6 arms cultivation technique that Chinese people are so crazy for. The thought of it disgusts me and I don't want to read about it. I quit reading this once that became Han Li's primary cultivation method. I just don't want it. It's stupid.
The translation disappoints me... it's directly copied from mtl
Any updates??
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This is a heartwarming tale that captures the reader's attention from the very first page. The dynamics between the characters are wonderfully depicted, making it a captivating and enjoyable read. Highly recommend
a good story but need some improvement in characters
I like the way you describe the details , I just started reading it but now it's in my library . so don't become lazy and keep updating have a good day
5 Stars because you have to love what you write, or it will fail. Now, about the novel, you can expect good adventures, good action, good romance, good vibes, and the "good stuff." Hope you all enjoy it, but if you don't, thanks for the try anyway.
The world is so exaggerated, I just don't care for it. This novel heavily focuses on comedy and it just falls flat. All the comedy amounts to is MC being lusted after, or his master being shameless and greedy.
Hey everybody, this is a shameless review from yours truly, the author.All I have to say here is, make it to The Ceremony, and then decide whether you want to drop it or not.Thank you for checking out my first novel!
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