A novel with a very nice premise, written by an author who has already proven their capacity to write this sort of story, expect a nice side-serving of comedy to go along with the whole thing!
amazing start, I really like how the author writes even though it was a bit of a slow read it grabbed my attention from the start, though i wished that the author would update more frequently via stockpile if writing everyday is just not your thing, keep it up author
Captivating story! The best I've read so far?❤
Are you really out of ideas to write such a book?
OoohhhExtremely intriguing Other novels speak for the author's competence ?
Too much similarities of story and plots with other novels. it's boring
i just want to do this better so i could reach more readers's so imma rate my own novel LOL HAHAHA
I find the story very touching and appreciate the author's portrayal of the character. The way the chapters end, leaving you with a sense of curiosity and a desire to know what will happen next, is indeed an excellent storytelling technique. It creates anticipation and keeps the reader engaged. Keep up. The good work there is some punctuation mistake but they can be fixed.
a captivating story indeed you should start reading this
I just had to leave another review if you have the opportunity please pick up this novel it's just pure excellence and it hasn't even really got started yet and can only get better from here jumping in now would be the wisest choice
is there romance like segs ? please tell I like segs
This is really a good novel. I like everything: good story plot, characters and their potential development. I am looking forward for more updates. Also, I will definitely recommend to everyone to read this novel.