I’ll be honest with you all—this lady has written brilliantly so far, no doubt about it ?. But if she messes up in the future, I won’t hesitate to toss my words right out the window ?! For now, though, everything is on point, and it’s definitely worth your time. Let’s see where this journey takes us!
Keep up the good work !!!? .
This is a novel for heroes like me. Nothing more, nothing less.Even the greatest of heroes need their fair share of degeneracy and debauchery. Gendr reversal is my favorite kink, don't tell Iron Man
This is going to be interesting, definitely following this one after reading your first completed book. Hoping for more chapter updates.
Definitely giving this 5 stars!! Saw link to this novel on a social platform, synopsis was nice and I decided to only take a peek, but I got hooked from Chapter one and I had to open an account here, just to make sure I dropped a review. One thing that I love the most is how the story is told from the FL's perspective. It flows well and there's a bit of humor to keep me going. I don't want to say much about the story though, but if I could describe it in two words, I would say 'simply amazing'. Keeping my fingers crossed for the next chapter. Nice work, author!!
Seems like a decent story, but just not for me. It's written in a cartoonish/anime way, as though I should read it while visualising what's written like a cartoon or an anime. A lot of minor details are left out, and it feels like things happen in defiance if reality. Feels like people teleport all over the place, turn into dust clouds when they run, cough up blood from irritation, etc. On top of all this, everything feels like it's all over the place, with no solid connection between events that follow each other, or logic to the encounters and flow of the story. While the writing quality is quite good, with few errors, the story doesn't seem like it has any substance. The characters behave way too goofy for my tastes. A lot of it feels illogical in that way. I kinda like the premise, but I feel it's poorly executed. I read up to chapter 15, and I don't know if it improved later on, but that's how iIfeel about it. But good luck to the author, and I hope your novel goes well.
Pls support my book in the best way you can, thank you
Has potential, and is a _unique idea, and you seem dedicated and passionate about it, but I think some modifications are needed:1. Add some relevant tags. Almost no one on this platform is gonna read something that doesn't have at least a few tags. besides the platform won't push and spread it out if you don't set it. 2. I can't differ which text is for the system and which text is the narrative; I mean put the system on a format like a common one is just putting the system commands or prompts or status between '[ 'system' ] or something like that. keep it up!
it is really good, and I like the history bit at the end of each chapter,?
"Oh, I have not yet desu," Kenji answered.
"Really Sir? So I was not a homo even though I'm homo? I knew it." Mr. Sangefull answered panicly.
"It is fine." Aqualad assures as he reads her body language since she won't say anything. "Robin and Superboy neutralized the Fog, and Dr. Roquette is safe, thanks in no small part to you," She glances over her shoulder before fully turning to face him.