Yay I'm happy you started writing again author please never drop this novel at least get it past 500 chapters
I really wanted to like this novel but honestly i just can't tragedy genre just ain't for me i guess. everything that can go wrong does all the time. in all honesty this novel feels depressing and i don't mean depressing at times I mean overall there's constant air of depression that just never goes away ever. also a few just just absolutely revolting things happen as well but you can over look those.the power system while admittedly unique kinda just feels weird and clunky.the MC, hmmm idk how to peg him to be honest but if you're familiar with the authors work and writing style then he shouldn't be very much different.other characters are pretty decently fleshed out to be honest some of the specters are a bit more interesting as characters.overall if you're into tragedy and that kinda stuff give it a read, if you're not don't touch this with a 10 foot pole.
Overall all an amazing story! I didn't find any too big writing errors, but no human is perfect. Uhm, I would prefer the update stability to be better, but it is what it is. I think the story is going in a great direction. Character design is impeccable. World background, well, I haven't seen much, but from what I have seen, it is detailed and nice.
This novel is bloody awesome webnovel better not drop this beauty please let it go on forever and ever. Thats all I am gonna say . what else could I say
At first I thought that his name was "Hello". XD that was really dumb for me.Anyway, all I can say is it was a fun read and entertaining. The title is weird and funny. The writing is okay and I know the author has his primary book participating the WSA, so having this book joining a new contest is understandble. All I can say is that the novel focuses more on "telling" and less "showing". It would be more entertaining if the chapters gets a full edit in the long run about the showing stuff and make it more engaging. Overall, 5/5!!!!
Author please make mc normal again as being blind is not comfortable and make mc powerful, cold and ruthless too that should be cool!!!! !!!!!!!!!!
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I’ve read until chapter the recen chapter which is chapter 8.The writing quality is very good, almost no writing mistakes. Although a slow story development as I can see it’s good.Updating stability is decent, 2-3 chapters dailyStory development is also good. I’m not good at writing review so Im just writing what I think. I think it’s unique, ehh the start I mean. Also for the future the world background would be be eh big considering what would happend.Character design is good: his character is till in development, still young but yeah it’s ok.
is it a harem or romance (I haven't read it and if it's a harem then it's no go for me)
I’v lost count of how many stories I’v read hear after a while it gets repetitive this is honestly great finding Jems like this is what keeps me reading I love the power system character development and more I really f****** hope it ends up continuing
Supeppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppper underrated novel, though needs a bit of polishing in the writing department if the author does that he is golden
This is probably the best story I have ever read. I just love the cuteness and humor in this story. I just wish that it could be continued Is the story over? It has been over a year since last post. Is everything ok. -Concerned Reader