to preface this review, I read until the end of the free chapters and I figured I should give my piece.The premise from the title does sound incredible, even for a system novel and when the MC finally gets more involved in the story around chapter 16-20, it starts to pick up. Between chapter 5-15 ish involves a lot of world building but it's not related to the MC which was a turn off for me.The system also takes a long time to come into the picture (around chapter 22 ish). Generally speaking, the starting chapters can stand to be rearranged or be condensed since it's not enough of a hook imo. As from the brief time I had with the free chapters, the MC is written somewhat close to an 8 year old would think, albeit more mature than expected which is a nice detail. I honestly couldn't tell you who are the side characters beyond showing me the names and what they are but not much more.It definitely has promise and definitely isn't a bad read if you are looking for a pirate themed novel. It just could be executed better from an entertainment standpoint.
A gripping, page turner book that will leave you on the edge of your seat. This is an incredible book worth more than just one read through.
fun oblivious mc who finds the exceptiknal and marvelous in the ordinary! who needs a sword when you have a kitchen knife! who needs pills when you have soup!
Okay I read a few chapters and I really like the concept, the mc's power is very interesting but I don't like how the book is giving me harem vibes already. I could be wrong since I only read a few chapters tho. I don't hate harem but I dislike it with most novels as it ruins the plot. The mc's personality also irks me a bit too but overall I have high hopes.
Story itself is good. But protag? My god, he's one of the dumbest bastards you'll ever get to see. One moment he does something incredibly stupid, next chapter author gives an actually good explanation for why that happened...only for mc to immediately do something even more retarded for absolutely no reason. Prepare yourself for endless frustration if you choose to read the novel, might wanna brew some camomile tea first to keep your blood pressure in check.
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
Hurm, how to say this without offending the army of anti-bad reviewer?... First, the synopsis kind of wrong? He said he found it, but from my humble opinion, he make it appear.. And then, the ChuGe guy has a weird sense of value to equipment... Everything seems like a trash for him. And don't forget that he has the weird personalities. Maybe because he learn it from the bad guy? He get a pet dog, four to be exact and use it for aggro... I know it's fiction, but this kind of tick me off...
i have never actually tried to review a novel properly but i will try...This novel is better for slow readers, and those that love gradual progressing plots and reasonable developments, it has a great amount of mystery to it along with a thrilling feeling while reading it, the few fight scenes it has had so far are wonderfully written any you can really imagine it.Relations ships are stable and not erratic, when a relationship is made they are set in stone until otherwise made to change unlike some authors that have the relationships of people changing day in and day out.i would say this novel is one where you have to think on what might happen next as the while the progressing may seem almost random it is great... and i am repeating thing right now... anyway what i was saying is that if you want to guess what is going to happen next you need to pay attention to little details. The entire novel so far flows from one situation to another seamlessly and beautifully.Since, it was so good i will just leave the total score at 5 stars, and ignore the stability....
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I'm putting this here since not much people give a damn about first chapter comments.To all of you that criticize this novel. I have a question. Did you truly read it? Or were you smacked down to first impressions? Must all first impressions be really good?Listen here. From all the reviews that I get on this novel most of them says how ****ty this is. Don't get me wrong, I'm not here to defend the novel. I'm here to educate you.You judge by the first chapter. You judge by the sypnosis. Then you throw in your 'opinion'. What did you expect? A dude that makes chaos and the like right at the bat? A dude that doesn't give a crap and just kills anyone? My god. Read the ******* title properly cause if you don't ******* get it. Then go back to gradeschool English.Pls take note. If you expected an actual 'villain' to be thrown at another world and then make chaos then get the hell out of here. I don't need people to read this when they think that the title is A villain transported to another world. Take note you r*****s. The title is. I'll "become" a villain in another world. "Become
It's all good at first of how the mc (A.I) makes a game to scam the earthling and all that gene transformation..... Until one of the players started to notice that this is not game and she started to act arrogant(?) by demanding wages. I just don't like this kind of development because i want the mc has a complete control over the situations. I hope that one day the players will know that this is not a game bot in this kind of way.I like this novel but i don't like this development. Feel free to unlike me.
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