Even though the plot is not that engaging....But For the mere fact that he is non-human and doesn't hesitate to kill humans i will give it 5stars..especially after all those non-human mc where they ALWAYS become friends with humans and even killing their own race to save humans...
Hola, Its the Author. I genuinely didnt know I could write a review for my own book...Mwahahahaha.Anyway enjoy my shameless review.Downfall Of The Kings is a fantastic book. It plays with a lot of ideas and topics that have already been established within the fantasy community. While the book is certainly inspired by many of these, I can assure you, its defenitly unique in its own right. Prepare for a lot of twists, turns and snarky stupidity. Honestly would You expect anything less? The main character is modeled after me you know.The writing at the beginning is very rough so bear with me please. I think the quality seems to be getting better... I dont really know but its a lot easier to write now.[Insert Awkward Laugh Here]Anyway Im sure I have bored you by now with this Review. Go out There and read my book!!!!!!!!Please...Sorry for the exclamation points, I didn’t mean to yell at you, I was just excited.Thank you for all your continued support!!!!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Our MC transmigrated after being the last one to log out of a game aka instant karma. Stereotypical plot, Orphaned and has a sick sister, the world is against him, blahnik, blah.
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If people could look past the grammatical errors, you'd enjoy the concept. Authors are human too! And FYI writing is hard, especially with an audience. Lighten up, because this is a diamond in the rough!
Yes a self review of 5 stars by this author. I try to on my own pace and try to release atleast one chapter everyday. I like to increase or decrease the pace of the story depending on the moment of the characters. With a big background for the MC, he might be a bit confusing in the beginning but will get clearer as time goes on.
I have a doggo he is a cutie. he makes me so happy when he shake his booty. he wags his tail cause he so happy. with him a day can not be crappy.
Worth a read and hopes it gets picked! Similiar to “The world online” but also different in its own ways. There are a few problems or annoying things in the story but overall they are easy to set aside to enjoy the story and character, especially if you like the premise of this type of story like i do.
Okay, let me be honest here. The writing needs a lot of improvement. The sentences are long, and there are a lot of punctuations missing. The tone is straightforward and has little flow.BUT THAT'S THE ONLY BAD PART HERE!!!!If you go beyond the writing quality, you will find an amazing story. The characters and world are well and show's writer's passion on the work. Amazing, keep up the work and keep on improving. :)