spectermerlin
Okay okay I've only read to chapter 9 but I can tell this is better than both of the VR novels currently in the top 40. The grammar is impeccable. The MC isn't dull, I haven't gotten to the side characters yet but I have complete faith in the author. Please don't drip this novel Mr. Author I'll do the best I can to get this noticed. I'm in it for the long haul. ?
Best book I have read in years, the characters are well polished. Please continue with publishing fabulous chapters for us to indulge in. I would say, though, to add more humanoid characters in the story as well
It was good novel you know new concept etc but it quickly become boring. Because of few things first of all there is racism in this novel(obviously). All the 'criminal origination' and 'kidnapping' is done by foreign people . You can ignore that part but you can't ignore the story development everything is happening around the MC. You would say because he is the mc! right ?No story development is not done around the MC for example A competition is arrange and mc ' chiche ' there that's normal, because mc needs to travel but if mc in two places (Yes just two in whole novel) and everything happens around him. It becomes boring.
this story has immense potential my only regret right now is there isn't enough chapters q,q
What I hate the most is the dense mc...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The writer just made me attracted to this book like a magnet, I honestly just started reading the book but even the beginning is amazing, a big thumbs up to the writer.
This type of book is not necessarily groundbreaking, but it is entertaining and easy to read, exactly what a light novel is supposed to. The MC is not just point-blank and characterless but has her own mind and a nice background story from what I've read so far. That makes also the interaction with the System very delightful to read. Keep it up
"At a wrong place, at a wrong time" - This is probably what I would describe the status of this Novel. Dark Blood Age is a novel that's unique in a sense that it tries to become something greater than the format that is it written in - "web novel" - usually allow. The novel takes itself super seriously, implements famous literature gothic literature, feudatory chinese philosophies, ancient myths and archetypes. For example, the main character starts off as a normal white collar worker, but during the progress of the storyline he gains more and more qualities of a "byronic hero" - which included considerable level of intelligence, self-criticism, self-destructive, loner,... Unlike other reviewer opinions, the side characters have a significant level of polishing to them as well. To illustrate, in chapter 244, the story direct to a tragedy of a father have to choose which of his 2 children to let go into the hands of a bunch of cannibals. The situation itself is extremly similar to the origin of the main antagonist of the famous manga "Monster" of Urasawa Naoki. In "Monster" the main antagonist reveals that the very action of choosing one of the children of his mother is one of the reason turning him unable to feel emotion - thus, making him a interesting antagonist. However, in this book, we can see that this option is justified due to the cruel circumstances of the world, and only by choosing to let go of one of the children is the only way to create a living opportunity to the other. The decision of the father also reflect the reality of *** discrimination of the china's society. The archetypes, myths and other inspiration that the novel borrows is not something "new" or "groundbreaking
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oh my god, I can't wait for another chapter it's so interesting it was like hunger games first but later. I'm speechless great job author it was amazing
