This novel is just stupid. From chap 80-110 we already see a battle that feels like the final battle in any other novel. At a point I was just scrolling through wondering when this fight would end so we can go back to the MC getting stronger. But lo and behold, the author already thrusts the MC in another world in CHAP 111!!!!! ALREADY!!!!Like it just feels like the author has no idea what character building is!! We already have a massive battle and a final boss fight in just the first arc??!??!?
gets better every chapter~~~
Self review after 150+ chapters of writing this novel. Ofc, allow me to shamelessly rate it 5 stars without stating the reason why just like the other shameless authors out there.
If you have any questions, you can ask in this review and I'll reply to the best of my abilities.
First and foremost, I'll be blunt and tell you honestly that I have planned to there be a yuri at the very end of this story.
The Yuri that I meant here is not explicit. It will only be mentioned and that was it, as it did not have a major relation to the plot.
It is such a big world so it would only be natural that other people would surely have this kind of relationship. This is what I meant when I said that it has Yuri.
However, since a lot complained about it, I decided to scrap this idea and just settle in a world that has no Yuri. It has no major part on the plot anyway and was only there to spice things up.
Next. Yes, for the last time, this is harem.
The harem won't grow explosively as I wanted the MC to slowly develop his relationship with his girls until they reach that point of their relationship.
There will be smaut, but as I am still currently learning this Dao path, please allow me to make mistake and improve as I write.
I always read all your comments but please be informed that I wont be able to reply all of them.
If you have some questions, you can ask here. If you don't have any, then why are you still here? Go and read!
it's good
A very well written story with great character and world development. Element of ecchi is a big plus and provides interesting business logic and cunningness. The premise is different from the usual cultivation genre and is quite refreshing.
Will definitely follow this work through given how well laid out it is so far.
Would make an awesome manga or anime. The supernatural element makes it appealing to a wider audience!
Author, I think someone is copying your novel. He changed names but the entire story is same. Novel name is "Dual Cultivation with system" by MythicalCreatures.
I didnt read it yet but I hope u wont disappoint me n yeah keep it up
I'm very disappointed here. Despite the promising beginning, after chapter 4 the story becomes just a copy of the novel Debut or Die. Waste of time...
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Solid 5 stars without hesitation, a total masterpiece ?This novel totally deserves it, especially after the ebonmere chapters very well done.
Extremely bad translation. The terms keep changing every chapter.