The fight scenes are dragged out a bit which is fine and all but Mc acts like a brute most of the time during fights which kinda kills the characters diverse abilities.
Great story development is nice pacing. Everything is great. it's not my type of story, but i would advise anyone to give it a try.
Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?
It is one of the best novels I have read recently. Although it is a bit slow to start. once the story picks up it takes a cool twist and turns. I loved the twist and I hope the author won't drop the book.Looking forward to more chapters ..
Till now the novel is good , great plot development and mc . Just a request don't make Ren and novel's hero bff like rest other villain transmigration novels (except for chinese cultivation novels where logic does not work ) keep a certain amount of hate or rivalry among the novel's hero and Ren . It would make the novel more interesting than reading the same plot again and novel's mc had killed the novel's Ren which is the same as the other Ren .Don't make Ren sissy by simply forgiving others just keep his attitude like this only throughout the novel .My best wishes , please don't drop the novel
following along is difficult sentences seem abrupt
I think it's a good start. Writing quality can be improved. Writer should post more daily chapters instead of 2.
I was looking this kind of masterpieceThis novel got, Hardworking MC, Weak - Strong MC, Righteous MC, Regression. Definitely one of those peak Regression stuff, based on the manhwa The design of the character itself great, plot? Slow but steady, story development is great, writing alsoIs great, Character development????? Knight / 10
Mamamia!!! .
Good for now. Have to see how it develops whether to continue or drop. The last time it was not updated in regular basis let see if it is done now
translation quality took a nosedive after chapter 210. the story is very good. Although the MC is a bit too much of a simp at times, I'm enjoying this read quite a lot. mostly due to there being dungeons and game elements.
I loved how the author delved into the world of underground fighting. The intense action sequences are written with such vivid detail!