Very interesting. The take on revenge written in a different way. Reading is enjoyable and loving the character of the main. Satisfying, watching them dance in the palm of her hands. Good job author.
I have no issues with the translation quality, which is actually great. However, as the story progresses, it just feels like another generic adventure story with nothing special to mention. Despite the MC having an absurd amount of wisdom stats, it doesn't seem to have any effect on him, unlike the other stats. Even with his other absurdly high stats, when he finishes his training each time, he only looks at his status and never truly shows any indication of his rising power. The only scene that hints at his increased strength is the dumbbell scene, which isn't a clear indicator of his growing power.
"Yes Mrs," said Mamat.
"He won't care and just smiling hearing the ridicoulus human talking that thing they were smart, but what they know is an illusion that can be true or false.
"In the rooftop? " ask V
'I can not forget that these girls are still inexperienced when it comes to relationships,' thought Hiro.
instead of complaining I just got up and I left cause I'm getting annoyed just seeing his face. My Gosh! hope that he'll trip on the hall! hmph!
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"Please help us, Raito-san!" said Potato-sack.
All that glitters is gold
After their engagement, I was treated like nothing. My father turned his attention to only his fiance and "daughter" . Leaving me in dust. He gave all my things to them, all my prized possessions, including the hairpin my birth mother gave me after she died giving birth to me. You see, the only reason I was being spoiled by my father in the first place was, I looked very similar to my mother. But when he found someone else, I was nothing in the family. I never got anything, I'd always have leftovers from breakfast, dinner, and lunch. Everyday, my stepsister would get ready by doing nothing, the maids did it all for her. Well I had to iron my own clothes, pack my own bag, do all my homework by myself. Sometimes, my stepsister would even "demand" me to do her homework for her. I couldn't say anything to anyone because I would get in trouble for "complaining". This all happened when I was only 6. The bad thing is, that was only the beginning.
The Intruder strips his clothes off, and pins Marina's figure. Marina tried to struggle out of the uncomfortableness, and slowly opens her eyes. She saw a man above her, it got her surprised, she tried struggling out of his grasps, until she noticed that he looked very familiar.... "Your Majesty?"