A writer myself, I have to say this novel was quite interesting. It was quite unexpected at a particular point, after the plot had been developing for a while. You see I though they were going to go accomplish their goal, but they were actually just following along with their predetermined destiny. I was pleasantly surprised by the creativity of the author and the uniqueness of the characters. 10/10 would recommend to a friend. 11/10 would continue to read.
tell now the story going very well and it's good enough
I seriously don't understand, why on earth would someone who seemed to love his mother and was getting ready for dinner suddenly run into his room to commit suicide?, even his attitude at the beginning was seriously off, why would you curse like that because someone told you not to trip?.
The idea of the mc being nameless is rare but it is also interesting that way. Devil tier? That's a good one there. I highly recommend this book to fantasy lovers. It is a grand hit.
So I finished reading this story until the last chapter (Ch 9)First of all, first two chapters could use a little of Max monologue (just a little). His world seemed silent to me. I feel disconnected with MC in the first chapter.I love how the author trying to describe the sadness of losing someone, it's heartbreaking I'd give points to that. But I wish in that moment we could also know more what he was thinking..his feelings..maybe try to show how the deep connection he has with his brother in the first two chapters..But... from ch 3, then that's when it gets interesting. To me the story fly after this chapter. So if you plan on reading, don't give up on the first two, cause you won't be disappointed, cause I didn't. Overall, this is a diamond in the rough. Yes it needs polishing, but if u ask me is it worth reading? My answer: Yes.
Lucia’s struggle to survive in a dangerous dystopian world is gripping. The setting feels vivid, and Eric’s mysterious introduction adds intrigue. A great start—I’m excited to see what happens next!
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So far, with the few able chapters, the concept of the story seems promising. The start focuses on developing the MC and introducing the unique concept of the story. With a more intense chapter ahead, this book will surely get its fair share of readers.
A good book to read and know more about mahabharata. Good work by the writer,keep going with these kind of topics other than the normal story novels. All the best
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
The things I want to clarify with my readers are that when I refer to 1 Earth year, it equals 100 years in the realm. This part is not very important because it's just for the first chapter, so you can understand the difference between them.Another point is that I made the main character strong because, let's be honest, I'm not interested in writing 1,000 chapters for him to go from weak to strong. I’m writing this so my main character can provide guidance to others, just as my readers will guide me. He will be a sect leader, and I want him to teach how it works. I also aim to make it a sci-fi type of cultivation manhua.
it's very good ,if you think mc is annoying just give it a time it will get even better,