Good work author. Nice start. Keep it up.?❤️????
not bad i guess im gonna wanna continue ❤️
Good, absolutely amazing. Keep writing, i love it
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
Very interesting story, and great lesson learnt. Life is full of pains, but the patient ones get through with victory I'm not real good I writing English on how to explain the great lesson that I learnt in this book
It’s a fantastic start for a story and there’s a lot of potential for itI look forward to more chapters
good novel with compelling characters at least for the first 20 chapters. lets hope it conzinues
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Honestly I had a high expectation for this novel, but the author tried play smart and made the Mc a slave for a girl that he barely knew, he got injured in the most stupid way, I mean the the two Supreme dragons can talk to him, they could have warned him about it but no they decided to let him get injured seriously so they can make him a slave, it’s so forceful that I felt like vomiting when I read that part.Let’s not forget about his sister who at first seemed to be injured then became cursed, main character doesn’t even have the body memory except for his parents being tortured and him running away.And the main character was supposed to be smart and ruthless he couldn’t sleep because he was traumatized please, he couldn’t stand the stares he was receiving please, he almost couldn’t hold himself because of a girl please man that’s stupid.And the worst part is the main character refusing to get stronger in a world that he knew that strength is everything because of stupid fear that he will gather attention.I think the autho should remake it, and will not talk about the name of the novel.Good luck
I read till 300 . I will be honest to develop a character taking 300+ chapters is too much. 300 chapter and lots of things happened but time moves fking slow. writing quality is average because of constant switching between povs.Most annoying thing is slow progression and stupidity of mc not to level up. I don't understand why some idiots tried to compare this with The Author's Pov . it can't even come close to it.ONLY good thing about this novel is story has potential but author does best job in ruining it.I'm complaining because of time wasted to read till here hoping it would get better but never did.
"C-come on Doc ..!" i got an eletric shock.
Not long after Hao Ren finished reading this biography of Long Ni's life there was a distant wail coming from the border between the continents that the humans lived and the ancient beasts habited. Hao Ren being so close to the border he was able to hear this now and quickly traversed through the thick forest to finally meet a cave in a small mountain that was emitting a bit of light and energy. After walking through the cave for a brief period of time Hao Ren noticed a creatures body moving up and down as it heaved its body to breath as it struggled to stay alive.