Slightly confused at what im reading. Im at chapter 205 and literally the world building of this novel leaves much to desire. The premise of the book definitely starts off on a high note but at some point as a reader you literally say aloud “wtf is going on?!”. Theres no foreshadowing to speak of, the mc deviates between natural speech to prim and proper “ye old english” with bits of slang thrown in here and there and to cap it all of… the MC Is the stereotypical beta character who is 90% of his time thinking self deprecating thoughts but “some how” will pull the occasional confidence out nowhere. I find myself asking myself is he weak, irresponsible, secretly clever or just dense. i understand the mechanics of how a flawed character should behave as there are plenty of light novels that have this character motif of weak to strong (i.e second coming of Gluttony, Devils Son in Law, etc) but this MC leaves me literally flabbergasted. Its not a bad novel per se but i feel the MC is tryibg hard at being something he isnt. Eventually i will come back to this book perhaps but for me personally i just think unless you can deal with a typical beta MC who maybe through some past life act of valor (saving a universe, stopping Thanos’s snap, or defeating truck-kun) somehow ended up in a harem but not a harem (as some of the characters are plainly disrespectful or love him for absolutely no reason that can be found at all) that maybe this book isnt for you. Apologies to the author if this criticism is too harsh but im actually trying to temain objective about the failing points while remaining polite. TYVM.
As an author i guess i can only say that I love my own work, and for those on the fence about reading it.I tried to come up with something new, that would combine some of my favorite games, to create an intriguing story that I personally have had more than one dream about happening.
Hello, the author here! So, this second review is posted after 200 chapters! What a crazy thing. The other review has some things wrong, so I'm here to correct them and to tell you about other new things. Firstly, I wanted to thank all of you who have read my novel, we are almost at one million views, and I can't believe it. Thank you, dears.Second, the schedule is actually daily at 21:00 UTC+2. You can easily search how to compare it with your local hour on Google. Next, I wanted to say that I've edited the first ten chapters or so, so the grammar is a little bit rough after that point, but I would say that it is readable. Later, I made massive improvements.Following that, this story has a LIMITED harem. The main character won't go collecting women like trophies and cares about all of them dearly. They are also a big part of the story and won't be left behind and forgotten. They all complement each other, creating a healthy relationship between them.Also, there are only Female on Female relationships; there isn't any romantic situation with males.Finally, Any other question you have, you can ask here or in my comment. Thank you for reading this, and I hope you can try my novel and follow Yasenia's adventures in a cultivation world that is slightly different from the norm. ...I hope I didn't forget anything.
Turns out, I never left a review for this amazing book. My apologies. Let's get to it. Wonderful world building, the story keeps you on edge, wanting to know more. Perfectly paced, not too rushed or fast-paced. The power ranking is well thought out. The evolution path is steady so far. The MC makes logical decisions and is very cautious, which is a plus for me. Keep up the good work, author.
Great so far!The cover is awesome af! ??I like it!
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If you have problems in your daily life you should find it compelling. please read.and don't forget to give reviews.Both good and bad reviews are welcome and if you want to give some advice it's also welcome.
It's really good and beautiful. I feel Jake's pain as Abby doesn't seem to remember them. It's perfectly crafted with every ounce of sadness. The fact that only their sister is supporting them is really good. Plus, "it doesn't matter if we end up together, we can make few memories to ourselves. "
I want to inform everyone that on December 31st, I will be rewriting the FIRST three Novels, ever wrote ad it will mark three years I have been on the platform and they will be available on Webnovel and Honeyfeed.