Dawn_Potter
This series looks quite promising .One can tell the author is novice but is trying to put his best in the story.The development of story is quite fast paced but ok. The power system can be more elaborated, but I guess the author has already thought about. Overall a great pick to start a new series
I love the story :) <3 My heart is still pounding against my chest while I am just reading the story. Is like I am falling deep in love with every action both MCs make. I want more and more
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you've done so well even though it's your first bookI'm ok standby waiting for mee thrilling chap8
So I will be give full stars because I did enjoy the story so far.Main issue that I could tell is complexity and depth of the characters and also their themes but it’s still an enjoyable story, the system and progression. For me personally I like to dive into a characters thought process but that’s just personal preferences.Also congrats on being signed and well done, hope the later chapters have the characters more developed
recommended for anyone looking to lose themselves in the story
The book is interesting for those who love dark/royal romance. King Karl is a character that one can't help but fall in love. How can a man be do dangerous yet sweet?
i cannot believe i have stumbled upon this. I have always wondered what history would have been of raje was saved. please please continue ... im dying to see how you portray Raje and MCs interaction.
This is a beautifully written novel; I love how the female lead doesn't take shit from anyone even though I think she's a complete masochist? Anyway, this is a good story. Keep up the good work author.
as the author, I'm shameless and gave myself a 5
Thank you for the story I am really enjoying it so far. I like it and the world and can't wait to see more of it. I hope the story will be very good.
I really like this story... It's so fluffy... And light hearted.... And the character define is really well done... I really like the leads???? I recommend this book ???
