The last chapter put my heart in my hand, I was fond of the characters although I have to say that some of them really dislike me, but the hell they are made so that they don't enlarge you at first, until now
So then, let's begin with my own EXTREMELY OBJECTIVE analysis.Objectively speaking, my book is, of course, the best. No one will ever write a better one. Clear as day.Jokes aside, here's my assessment:Characters:Not bad, but far from good enough. The emotions are somewhat lacking, and a unique way of speaking would improve them.On the positive side, they have their own personalities and don’t just revolve around the MC.Worldbuilding:I’m proud of this. It becomes clearer as the story progresses—maybe in Volume 2 or 3. But I’ve put an incredible amount of effort into it.Story:It’s not bad, but it could have been developed a bit more.Overall, I think I’ve done a good job, but not a great one.There’s still a lot of room for improvement.By the way, it’s a rather slow-paced novel.If you have any questions, feel free to reach out to me!
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Hello! It’s me with my obligatory self-love review! ?I’ve been playing around with this concept for a while now and wanted to tell the story of Luca and his adventures. So, thank you to everyone who has taken the time to check this out. And thank you for even giving it a chance. Hopefully, you’ll love it as much as I do. ?
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This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
A very good story with high potential. Writing Quality is among the top 1% on this platform and story development in what I read (till chapter 8) is simply superb. The way the author set the background journey of MC and defines his character (before rebirth) while developing of MC's character in the new journey (after rebirth) was executed magnificently. Simple but it was impactful.
I like the story, I think it has good characters that were introduced well. It has good fights, good dialogue, good comedy in certain moments that kind of removes the tension a little.
nice beginning i hope it doesn't get boring ?
I don't find the whole "I'm talented, but you just don't know it" appealing. what's the use of being strong/having a strong talent if you are going to be walked over by everyone in the beginning? I will still give it a try, later, but I just can't find enjoyment in a novel where the protagonist struggles for no reason, after all, the journey as important as the destination, and for some even more. I'll update the review after giving the novel a try (which will be in a few hours)spoiler of mushoku tensei here:Mushoku Tensei is the perfect example. He became the strongest but lost everyone and everything, so he went back in time to try and fix everything, and even then he still lost it all just for another him to not go through the same stuff he went through.
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sorry my bad, forgot to review amazing novel pls keep up the good work ?????????????.