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As a new author who doesn't really know a lot about how to write good stuff, I request you guys to give me 'Constructive' criticism. Whether it's a mistake in my grammar, sentence formation, etc.
Also, I'm not doing this just to add another 5-star review to my novel.
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If you're an evil daoist like me, then this is definitely something you can't afford to miss. The MC is evil, he doesn't care of anyone apart from his Lil bro, he doesn't believe in the principle of love. When he is bored, he just walked into a place and you know what happens next....It's definitely a good read.
I love everything about this.Although i am sad to see her die that way with out those two talking it out before leaving for a mission like that.
way too expensive to read who can afford £80 to read a book?
I've seen this novel on the promotional shelf, it's amazing. This novel is really cool. It contains a very great character, a tough man. Spirit! I hope the application can provide another promotional slot for your novel
This is a nice write up from the author. It has a smooth plot and a good pace too. The author should keep up with the great work ??????
love the novel/story and lia's personality and also the mc
Sloth, my dude, my man. Do you have to put your MC through all that? We're the chains and the void is not enough. Now he's blood ends with magic and has blood loss? You'll likely kill him before he can do anything.And yes, I did read a few chapters before reviewing.
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I have read to chapter 12 in the raws through google translate and what the novel is about is at night time these space portal things open up and bloodthirsty creatures come out the main character can temporarily transform into a giant for only around 10 minutes and from killing the creatures he can get points to improve himself is what got from reading to chapter 12 he reveals his power to everybody pretty early too chapter 5 where the creatures come out and attack at the school dormitory he staying at there is some slight nationalism but it's alright.
I love this story but its update frequency is annoyingly slow. If you read the first few chapters the mc describes his own update frequency as an author. That's basically the update frequency for this. Lol. But so far I think ********** has caught up to the author.