as far as stories go, this one is one of the better ones. very few typos and even fewer plotholes, it is one of those stories that you want to cuddle up under a blanket with and plough through it all in one sitting.
Simple is better! Do not use big words and verbs in tenses that don't make sense! Even a comma can stop the flow of the story, and here it does. Please stop using big words just to show your vocabulary! It makes the story so hard to read. Cut the words that are put there to fill the page. It is a wonderful story with amazing potential but the writer has to realize that a phrase has rhythm. You block that rhythm with complicated words, commas that are missplaced or verbs in tenses that make no sense. A story is like a river. It has parts where it rages - that is where the reader gets to read faster, action is at the peak and you just want to know more! At the same time the river has parts where it is calm. Here the reader feels like wrapped in a cocoon of fluffy words. The immersion in the story happens here because this leads to the action! so please try harder.
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I have read a bit more than what has been posted so far so i can tell you more about the story than most others
so as you can see this is a story about a ghost but it's not just a cute girl ghost who does harmless pranks nope
She is a genuine vengeful ghost who wants people she holds a grudge against to die a horrible death
Regardless of that she still tries to have a happy and somewhat peaceful life
so you will see her being cheerful and bubbly and she will start some relationships though its slowed down a lot by her nonexistent self esteem
overall expect an action packed vengeful ghost and some slice of life cheerful but depressed ghost trying to have a happy life
Not to my taste. The start almost made me not read it. ... . . .. .... . .. . . . .. . . . .. . .. . . ..
The plot is good it starts with mortal going to martial world after 100 gaps but he arrogant, showoff and many more. He likes to flirt with every beautiful girls he see and as I see it it's good and all but it lack o e fundamental aspect as the title nameless immortal god means he reincarnated. He has no memory of his past life, there is no seal of his memories or trauma to make him remember his past life. Here I am confused about the novel.
It will take you on a great journey along the way to an adventurous path with Alan, an extraordinary prince. Just go for it.????????????????????????????
Like what daoist 1324 commented, this story has a really plain and simple writing style. To be very honest, this type of writing style rarely makes me feel excited nor motivated to continue reading the story.In addition, this is my first "farming-type" of novel I am reading and I just can't seem to get into the mood/atmosphere of the story. Maybe I am really not suited for such drawn-out and slow novels. This is just my personal opinions, and I am sure some of you guys may like this.Some cons I would like to point out:- Translation Quality→ Throughout the story, there are quite some grammatical errors inregards to pronouns. Sometimes, a/an plant/object is a "he/she" instead of an "it".- Story Developement→ Sorry, I just don't really see where the story is developing to. Basically, the story gives me the impression that this would just be a repetitive story where the mc would just cultivate, enhance plants, solve some problems and the cycles repeats, on and on. (This statement may be really unfair for this story as I dropped at chapter 12, but I will still stick to this point of view first.)- Character design→ I mean the characters are fine. The only thing I found weird was the mc didn't seem to have a goal? I mean he had one which was to get rids of his tumour. But after getting rid of his tumour, he just continued to enhanced his plants and cultivate. But the novel never told us specifically why he was cultivating. Am I right? Or did I missed out something?Yup, so basically these are just my personal opinions. A 3.2/5 for me.
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It was fun to read, fresh for my taste, and satisfying. The premise, characters, plot, and Worldbuilding are well made. The pace is smooth enough to make me enjoy every paragraph of the novel. I recommend this novel to all readers out there.
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