writing quality takes a very steep, very hard dive about 60 chapters in. english writing is in past tense, not present. the story is a bit pedantic, and lacks any sort of development. the characters are stock tropes and stereotypes, and fifty chapters in they have yet to develop in any way, minor or major (no, levelling up and gaining skills do not count as character development). the world has little to no background information given. you know almost nothing about it. the characters magically know about monsters, attributes, skills and abilities, but nothing is ever explained to the reader.
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I simply love thsi book and I have been waiting for it for a long time thanks to the translator and stuff , plz support this book , it's pretty funny and I m exited to know more .
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actually to me this novel is perfect its not too fast nor is it too slow its just right (and plus for making the mc kinda smart) but i was also wandering is the mc going to end up looking like the boy on the book cover in time?
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I must say the synopsis basically said the entire development of the story. Like most people read a story or a novel to have the mysterious feeling of the plot slowly being unraveled. But this entire synopsis is like a spoiler to its on. Basically, the entire plot said the mc will succeed no matter what. It didn't even bother sugar coating the tone that the mc is always right and anyone that cast a disdainful glance to the mc or a lustful glance to the mc's soon to be waifus would be slaughter within the next hundred chapters. If you enjoy reading this novel, then you must have some serious inferiority-complex and could only read these type of things to boost your ego.
Great read, MC's not OP and thinks logically. Typical reset dungeon type of novel but looks promising. Quality is surprisingly excellent. Author, please don't drop this.