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The first thing that stands out is beautiful writing. It's very emotional and quite exquisite read. The writer did a fine job in picturing the main character's emotion, as it flows nicely and is immensely descriptive, as personally, I somehow could feel his sorrow and emotion in quite vivid details. Dave Dalton as the main character, is a well-written and quite multi-dimensional character, an interesting character. His love for his late fiancé is what I like most in this story. In short, it's definitely a very good read for those who are into hopeless romance.
everything here is ok except for the grammar. Author if you are reading this please fix the grammar. Everything else is good though you just need to fix your grammar
giving same review. .coz I want to read it again ?.....................................
Basecly, the enviroment in this VRMMO is well made, we know that there is a world with mortal in a culture based on Vikings, and we know for sure that there is a lot of villages and possibly living in different biomes. That, for me, was a interesting idea, because the protagonist in playing a game where he is a god and have to make people follow his religion, praising and praying for him, because he get stronger as he gain more followers. But, the problem is that the author does not focus on this side of the story, the interesting one, he atcually focus on the RPG part of the game with all of the generic things we see in EVERY VRMMO novel, it's kinda desapointing see the author spending more effort in the generic part than in the interesting one where he can work with the mortal's personalitty, culture, world building, other religions, villages, hierarchy in the villages or even in his own religion. When the protagonist leaves the mortal world and go do his RPG stuff (Grinding, Pk, basicly killing people (When one of the most generic little villains like young masters and people with idiotic reason for try PK someone... dude, they still on beta, why someone would possibly try PK other players to get their itens and get stronger when they're gonna lose everything when the game is released?) and monsters, or searching treasures, but i don't know about that part for sure since i didn't even half of the story. I won't stop reading because i am hopeful that the author will make the MC explore further in the mortal world rather than make him interact with a lot of plain and generic characters with 0 importance for the story or the game itself. I think that grinding all the time is stupid since is just a beta, yeah, you will gain more experience fighting the monsters, but wans't the MC a professional player in this kinda of game? Would make more sense see him exploring the world as much as he can so he can find hiding NPC's, treasures, and places and to spread his religion, or even stablish a conexion with the important NPC's from big villages and stuff.
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Only I Am a Reader is a story about Leo Lock, a boy born with the ability to read books and obtain some of the skills mentioned in them. One day, he was suddenly transported into one of the books he read, and forced to survive until the ending. Overall, a really refreshing infinity-novel. I can't say too much so far, it's a lot slower than your typical infinity-novel, but that arguably makes it better. Hopefully it doesn't fall into the typical pitfalls.Writing quality is above-average, there are still some minor mistakes but everything is readable. (4/5 stars)Story development is pretty good. Both arcs in the first 300 chapters are pretty good, I'm hoping they focus more on the real world after the second arc though. Both stories seem realistic, even if both of them have rather cliché plots. Although it is interesting to see those "cliché plots" get fleshed out more than they normally would. (5/5 stars)The character design I have somewhat mixed feelings about. The characters are good, and most of them are rather 3d. For the most part, they feel like real people. However, due to the fact that the main character is going into novels, there is this ever-present barrier that the author puts around said characters that prevents them from being too fleshed out. Besides that, the main character still hasn't been properly fleshed out, there is a hint of romance at chapter 300, but it is extremely slow. (4/5 stars)World background is great. Obviously, some things are going to remain somewhat unrealistic considering it always has a third-party view on various protagonist's luck. Aside from that, these worlds are fleshed out and make sense, more-so than most infinity novels. (4/5 stars)Overall, novel is pretty great. Unfortunately there's some disconnect with the other worlds that prevent them from being super-great, but that comes along with the genre I suppose. Aside from that, everything is above-average. I give this novel 4.4 stars out of 5.
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Hi! My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!
I want to come back to this book when I'm in a better headspace. It's a bit melodramatic I feel, which can be tiring, but it's good writing overall. The kind of book that pulls you in and demands you pay attention. I enjoy books like this. They take you out of your comfort zone in the best way
Bigotry based on nationality. Yay! ...................................................................................................................
I love this book so far! I'd recommend this to be a fan of the supernatural wolf genre! I wasn't a super fan of the genre before this, but this book, might just make me one!
I have been waiting forever for somebody to pick this up I hope this continues to get translated because from what I read rhe last time this tory seems really good. I know that this is really long like last timme I checked it had over 10000 raw chapters but please start this again.
