Systems and Sex - if that's what you're looking for, you found it :DOn a serious note, the writing is clear and easy to follow, with a nice flow. System elements are a little heavy for my personal tastes, but appropriate for a litrpg. It feels like the MC is always down for some void sex (several sexualized encounters as of chapter 20) so I would consider that to be a primary facet/draw for readers. It takes a while for other characters to be introduced, but the story starts to open up more around ch18. The world is well-fleshed out and action scenes are easy to envision.
Guys when I say the author is a master of crafting a scene with descriptive language, I truely do mean it. The world and characters are also just really well paced; not too fast for you to digest. This story reminds me a bit of berserk and frieren. Just a good vibe with well balanced action as well as slice of life dialogue banter moments. Keep it up author! Amazing work.
I'm loving this story, please don't stop.
Was waiting for a psychological story and it's pretty good,currently waiting for next chapter overall I see a good character development and ya only time will say now
Not bad for a new writer. make a female mc story.
I love this story. Like it's bit similar to Pokemon, feeling nostalgic.The revenge at start is too meance.The progression is bit too slow but I lobe this.
Hot wiring hotter writer. What are you waiting for to update your story
Laura has been through a lot and I hope the ML isn't a jerk.Enjoyed the first few chapters.
I've just started and I must say, it's amazing. I highly recommend it for romance lovers???
It’s an intriguing story, love the setting and composure of the writer. I highly recommend it
Hello readers...As you can see, I've taken to writing three books on Webnovel and this work is the second one. This book focuses on the choices James has to make in his journey to exact his vengeance; will you do the same in his place or would you have done things differently?Give it a read and leave your thoughts. It'll be much appreciated.
From a guy who disliked math, not as much as me, to a guy who had 'instant counting' Author???....your character development is wildPlease update more chapters