Chrysalis has a manga guys
Pretty good
Ngl this is good
Pretty annoyed that he didn't kill the oceansky saint n the phenomenal saint
I can recommend u but that one is set in time of Dynasties period of China like old times. A secret love with problems with family and little misunderstandings here and there a good read the name is "SEEKING HAPPINESS" read that one.Other stories I can recommend are on Wattpad or websites where I used to read before the best part is that I read and keep only completed stories in my collection.
Why are they keep calling them boyfriend and girlfriend she is married to someone else?
the description was a mouthful to read out loud but it got me interested
Hello author.
I tried reading the first 10 chapters but eventually gave up. just my personal opinion but I recommend that you rewrite the starting chapters. The reason why is because the same thing was said multiple times but in different ways. Why would I want to read about the same thing twice?
I get that because of the constant time skips, you have to reassure the reader that "the mc has yet to change" but it felt strenuous to read and I wasn't told anything new.
Also the world building. You introduced us to the crumbled and war-torn city early on but it wasn't until after a few chapters that I was told that there was an actual group of people living together. Maybe I missed it but there was no explanation for how the (camp?) looked like.
These were just my thoughts and a writer can never cater to everyone so I understand if it was just me that prefers a different style of storytelling.
Dont know how this novel is getting popular. Good idea, but bad execution, bad plot, and worse characters all combine into a cringe dumpster.
It’s is a great story if it wasn’t for the updating stabili
This MC is just sad.He gets betrayed by his girlfriend who he wished to marry. His father was brutally killed by scum of society. He gets scammed by capitalist bussiness owners on frequent basis. When he pleads innocent to bystanders and police they never believe him. And his family survives on scraps. Yet this MC still preaches about the goodness of humanity.What's with this faulty characterisation? A person who went through so much in life can't possibly be a virtuous, upright, person. Did I mention this MC dies in a game which somehow mysteriously transmigrates his soul back in time? Implying that being killed in a game, killed him in real life too. What is this? SAO?This story has more plot holes than swiss cheese.
I find it hard to believe that the MC at peak mana control realm can't suppress with his aura alone the soldiers of wu kingdom in the mist forest who were part of soldiers who hurt meiyi who were just meager qi realm and the commander is probably only at early mana perception realm despite mc being enrage why is that? When a bad guy has higher realm , they can suppress thier enemy with aura alone but the mc don't?And why is he always late? When the elf queen is starting to battle allaina , seth is already near and he only took action when the queen is nearly dying going for the tree. As if you pause the whole world when you're writing a battle scene only focusing the time on battle. I mean seth should be already moving towards the tree to weaken allaina and yet he seems to just stood like an idiot watching the fight. And this kind of thing happens all the time making some kind of hero saving the day. Seriously! Stop that kind of BS!