it's very interesting book, keep up the good work, continue to put in your best
Its a good concept . I have been wanting to read a similar book since ages . The writing is good with no grammatical errors . World building and the rest are still not full revealed .
But i like the premise . So i will be supporting you and hope its what i expect .
luv this story, luv what youv've been doing. I look forward to every chapter, it keeps me constantly refreshing the phone everyday to see if a new chapter has dropped yet lol. I would definitely, and highly recommend this gem, to other readers who are fans of a good cultivation story.
Garbage grammer and spelling. pay wall way to early to really determine if it's worth the money no really world building
The novel is beautiful and I love the title of your novel! The synopsis is great too, and yeah also the Chapters are good! Your writing is professional, anyways overall it's fine! Good luck! Waiting for other Chapters!?
Great Story!Please Continue!............................................................................................................................
I really like this one! please, pick up this novel. I'm hooked. It's my first time writing for some novel being picked up. please!!!!! ????? Generally, I always find novels with similar plots, so they become boring for me. But this one is different. Finally something refreshing ?❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
1First this sound Trash from the description.A drunken gu that evolution to soul reaping gu is just pure stupidy and the sign that this novel would make zero sense ..............
Great story and writing. The basic idea somewhat reminds me of Bleach, but the writing is fantastic and interesting. Funny commentary always gets a chuckle. A better read than most of the popular books.
the start ruined the whole thing ?................................................ . .
I really read a few chapters, but I find the story very funny and even having a bad critical sense I think I need to write something. The plot is insightful and the characters are charismatic, (Yes, I know, my criticism is a disaster, but hey, I never denied that I have a potato opinion)
Alright, this small review is needed for reader that are about to approach the book. You aren't convinced at all by the uninformative synopsis, and even at the cost of minor spoiler want to know more about it.You already now that I'm a newbie author and English is not my main language. However you shouldn't be having many problems in understanding my writing, since many others already read the book.Still beware that the first ten chapters might be tough to read.SPOILERS AHEAD(not much though)Now who exactly is Xeno, he started off as weak being obliged to work hard every day to survive. An incident suddenly happens, death is slowly approaching him. To save his life he will accept an offer from a mysterious being, changing himself completely.Received a new body, Xeno becomes another kind of existence entirely, a more powerful and dangerous one.Yet what he believed to be true strength, will demonstrate to be weakness once again.However he chose not to abandon himself, but to keep believing in his convinctions. From here only the truly evil lies ahead. The ruthlessness necessary to shape everything in his path, for himself and the ones he holds dear. I hope you know have a more clear opinion about what to expect from the book.Disclaimer:Beware 'hold dear' does not mean romance, because he won't consoder anyone in a romantic way.