A potential scarlet that's deserved Don't really like harems tho it's too much all have same plot So there isn't much to expect but this is good tho But still sma e plot ??
The first chapter was intriguing. The way u convey how the MC was being bullied.. his expression and thought about it was on point. And I liked the fact that you added mystery in every chapter making people guessing what is this? Why? It makes me scroll to the next and the next until I ended up reading to the last chapter ... damn you made me lose time on writing my story. LOLOverall, despite ur confusing me, I still read it. So I'm giving you a full 5 star. Because U managed to magic ur way to my curiosity.
nice story. the characters looked good ?
Hi everyone! pinkfantaxxy here! I hope you'll enjoy reading my story. I'd really appreciate it if you gave it a chance and I hope you'll like it. I'd love to hear your feedback! Thank you so much!
I can't wait till this is updated. This has started off really good! Please don't just let this one sit author.
I suddenly found this and I love it, keep it up dude and I hope you have a wonderful New year.
Just give it a chance.mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmm mmmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmmm mmmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmmm mmmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmmm mmmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmmm mmmmmmm mmmmmm
Well... i don't really have much to say.all i can say for now is that it's enjoyable and interesting and I would have prefer if each chapter was actually more lengthy.
Cool! the descriptions, imagery, and humor is well balanced. the dialogues and flow of the story are natural, too.keep going, Author-sama!!
Pls tell me when will u update this book I really like it ?
A very nice story so far, it's quite interesting to see the twists and turns here and there. But the death of Alice is something to be sad if, I wish she wasn't killef
the writing is easily readable and story is just great in its going all the characters have a great character till now, world building is also top notch