Low key warlock of the Magus world. Well at least the start.
Can anyone tell me if the FL will end up with Xiao Yin. Come on. The stockholm syndrome has to stop. He tossed her to a prostitute den for the army. Dragged her and made her run with his horse tied by a barbed bow embedded on her shoulder. Only a stupid woman would fall for that cruel sick man. Im gonna run…
Its ok but main character is very unlikeable not sure if i will finish
Just writing this review for bragging rights though this not is interesting its not my cup of tea but I with still stick around to see if this becomes a ARTistic masterpiece not to mention the guy who mad this must be a ARTsy person and the ART is great and very ARTique.
I like it a lot and the idea is great and stands out amongst other ffs. Altough the Updates could be more often.
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Mysterious, anime like fighting and detailed descriptions. I really like the beginning and earlier chapters, introducing the world and stuff seems really good. Especially the glutton and the many variations of it. The world building is good, taking a mix of post apocalypse and monster (from what I deduced). You would find this extremely likable if you favor dark and full of monsters and struggle story. One thing that is really rare and interesting is the use of candy system lol
Although there are a few tweaks you need to make in the world background and the character design, the story overall is fresh and has a huge amount of potential so keep it up
World-building is in progress because obviously we're only 5 chapters into the story but so far, it seems like a typical murim world. Sunyoung's story is pretty interesting with his motivations as clear as it can get. I enjoy how the fight scenes have been described. They're not overtly detailed but contain enough information to formulate the flow of them
por favor vc pode enviar mais capítulos logo?!
I want to like this novel because it has similar premise to legendary mechanic. But wow the writing is just terrible. Pacing is horrible, first plot point hasn't been completed at chapter 40 yet a bunch of other nonsense has happened, and the girl has gone from weak villager to Reaping the lives of elites from the city. Story is just so disjointed its not fun to read
Seems like a good story I just wished there was a better translation because there are way to many Grammer mistakes and straight up just random. words in the middle of sentence.
Not my personal type of book but it was an overall great story that deserves a bigger comunity