thank u for the wonderful story i hope to read more of Agatha please give her more attention and exposure i wanted to know her back story with samantha and takumi
I came across this story by chance, and I'm a first time user. Can I just say how glad I am that it is this story that I came to as my first choice? The story gets locked a bit early on, but I'm already hooked onto the characters and their story so I really really want to know how this pans out! I want to see a character development for our fl and watch the ml burn! Please update faster dear author!!
Could not mc just set up fire? Or set of fire alarm? It would have forsed everyone to leave the building and it would not have compromised him.
I love my this story and the development of the Main character and support characters
A dash of comedy and a splash of crazy. This book has wonderful potential. Keep up the good work.
This novel is a promising gem with great character development and an engaging storyline. The emotions the characters convey are beautifully written, making each scene deeply impactful. The world-building is solid, and the pacing of the updates keeps the readers hooked.While still early, the story has immense potential to grow into a masterpiece. Fans of the "extra" trope will find something refreshing here, and the steady improvement in quality with each chapter makes it a rewarding read, since the author listens to his readers. Definitely worth following for anyone who enjoys a blend of action, mystery, and heartfelt moments!
Wonderful plot layouts and character design leaving the page turning thrills
loved the world building and vivid descriptions.Definitely hard to miss any derails in this work.
IT was really good until the Point where you got us into the water Story Just write Like a short chapter or something Like that that would have even cool other than that ther IS only the system write IT maybe in Like [ hi i am the system ] in this Kind of stuff but IT a pretty good Story until now
the story is original and quite unique only thing I dislike is the unfrequent upload schedual author really got to work on that one
I am really liking this story! I hope that you continue it more frequently! I also like that there are now some female characters that aren't super dumb or competitive. That doesn't happen a lot in BL novels, so it was a nice surprise. Can't wait to read more
This is the most splendid novel I have ever read!The details, character designs and the world background are so properly executed, I even cried at some point at the mc's suffering because I'm so engrossed ??The writing quality and Author's imagination are so engaging to read, it blew my mind that such a novel of this quality still exists today after reading countless brain-dead-end novels.Only the updates are pretty bad, since this novel is heavily underrated,But THAT quality in each chapter compensates for it.I hope you won't stop writing, just don't. Hope this novel and the Author get the attention they deserve!