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They are true as their names:-
#Devil: but not an evil!
Embedded as a cold hearted devil but has a soft heart not to harm any innocent even after betrayal. Has his own fare share of guilt to burn himself in, but live for the people he cares and love but never shows.
#Our FL: as innocent as a bunny ? (but don't forget bunny bites if being teased ?). Who's character is still to be build and features to be shown. Naive, innocent but not a fool.
Side characters are lovable, you crave for their presence.. and laugh on a certain someone's mumbling enough to bring tears to eyes.
Now, curiosity is killing me how this novel is related to WAD (Witch's Daughter and the Devil's Son)
I was never in love with any character ever to write or comment about them as I do for devil(s) created by you.
i think that reading mtl will provide more translation consistency than this... seriously bad translation. every now and then you will get absolutely stupid sentences that make no sense...
Why is this locked at 15? Makes no sense since its suppose to be a free 19 chapters read....Webnovel trying to scam for more money then drop translations on novel like always GG.
Although it is good, but MC is just plain stupid and idiot, has no common sense and still thinks that everyone is stupid. I really dislike the novels with idiot MC's
I can learn a lot from this and it gave me a new perspective in how other people interact (Is a NEET...JK) my bro, update soon please. Kept my boredom off and I certainly made time to read, although I needed to sit otherwise, I'll fall off the stairs. (っ´▽`)っ
really awesome story love it. I have a sick and twisted mind so i enjoy reading this book a lot just wish you would continue bruh wanna read moreee...its so entertaining and awesome....
This is an amazing fic, my main gripe with it is the fact that mc is ridiculously lucky, I haven't been able to read past chap 84 due to them being locked but I really loved everything that came before. I just find it odd that he gets the best gear and is generally the most gifted character in the game yet he hasn't even been playing for more than 2 months. The writing quality is decent enough with a few grammar mistakes and characters talk a bit too much because of run on sentences.Stability of updates is decent. Not much else to say here.Story development is amazing, you slowly integrate new pieces of information into the game-verse and expand upon the lore.Character design is pretty meh, not 1-d but certainly not 3-d. It seems there will also be a tough-girl jade beauty in Frey.World background like I said is very decent. Nothing else to say except for the fact that the plot is pretty T H I C C.All in all an amazing novel and it was certainly enough to motivate me to create an account.