The stories here are quite interesting. Though not all are exceptional works, ths ones that I've read have caught my attention. In fact, I could say that it os difficult to stop oncs you get started. I have stayed up late at night just to get to read more chapters. However, most of the authors could use an editor since the error on word usage detracts the attention of the readers.
"What are you doing in this kind of place, Red?" Bungad na tanong sa akin ng panget kong pinsan na si Matt, ng makasakay ako sa kotse niya. Tinawagan ko kasi siya para magpasundo. "Teka! Galing ka ba sa Police station na yun?" Turo niya sa isang Police station sa gilid. Nagkibit balikat lang ako na ikinakunot ng noo niya. "Yung totoo? What did you do here?"
"I could use some help." Faine called as she continued through the maze.
Zuko answered her with a slightly sinister smile which froze her in her tracks as everything began to turn blurry.
They were already home washing the dishes when suddenly her sister arrived fighting with her drunk husband at midnight.
"Is someone there?" He called out again, but was met with only a slight echo of his own voice.
Sorry, if there is an error in translating. because I translate it through Google Translate. Oh yes, the background of this story is from Indonesia.
Dari kejauhan Kahime menatap lurus ke arah Saki. Ia hanya tersenyum tipis saat ditatap olehnya. Akan tetapi, tidak ada reaksi selain tatapan datar darinya walaupun dia sudah tersenyum membalas tatapannya.
"What?" I asked as I squatted down on the bathroom floor and looked around. How come the girls' restroom is nicer than the boys' restroom? I thought but shook my head. Focus Luke, you're here to comfort your friend–or should I even say friend?
Many people were catching glances at them. Some were flattered, some were odd expressions. "O-okay, I got it. Can we just proceed to our date" she desperately wanted to got away from this unexpected embarrassment.
"Hey... Give me... More..."
"Good afternoon, Admiral Yanagi!"