I am so glad I decided to read this book honestly I might have overlooked this book if I had not recognized the author and boy am I glad I did the plot, storyline, and characters are all top of the line
Lemme begin from quality (GAWHD!) it's so great and highly readable, world building and creation of hype along with the character insights is awesome. Oh! I liked the humorous remarks by the family and the system making plus the guild scenario. The tinge of lust and the sprinkle of their bond- attraction. The world building is fine too and especially the dealing with newly found powers is a great descriptive part. The words and vocabulary chosen is absolutely amazing and it differs from the regular system we read which kind gets complicated but this is far cooler to understand cuz if 'showing' factor. Lesha and Kiada have great beginning tbh and the characters seem real with their down to nature and life problems.
A well written story, but it does seem to be missing a hook of some kind. There not much that differentiates it from all the other born in a fantasy world with a system. It looks like there is hints that the romance will be non-traditional which might add something as the story develops.
Nice, I like it but please don't drop it ....................................................................................................................................
It's a very good novel. One of the hidden gems of webnovel. Was a bit irked by the start cause the MC was never mad at his master for killing him but the dynamic between them is very interesting. It has a slight romance subplot with the master and the MC as well as the masters other follower. They aren't too OP that the book is boring, just perfectly balanced as all things should be. Overall a very good book and I definitely recommend everyone to give it a read.
I really enjoyed the novel, but after around chapter 60, it seems to have lost any sense of direction. There's no end goal. I have no idea where the novel is going, and not in a good way. It feels very uncomfortable to read a novel where the MC has no goal in mind for so long. I read up to chapter 120 at this point and it felt like a chore most of the time.
And keep in mind that these are all long chapters so it feels a lot longer than the average 60 chapters in Webnovel.
It's hard to explain the feeling of uncertainty that permeates the story. With no advancement of the story for so long and so much educational material crammed in, I can't continue reading. It's just not enjoyable anymore and I can't keep pretending it's not. Too much to read, not nearly enough progress in the story or characters.
Such a disappointment too. It had so much potential
I would first like to say thank you for your hard work for making this heart warming story. I really appreciate it ,deserves more support .The characters are really interesting and you give importance to every character and that's what I like the most of your novel . I like Ryan's character so much . He's so cool.? The story has so much emotions and feelings rather than any mature content. I've been always waiting for the updates. So update soon author.?
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I'll be completely honest here, I want to like this novel a lot more than I currently do.Writing quality: honestly leaves a lot to be desired, grammar is at times terrible. This wouldn't matter as much if it wasn't for the rampant inconsistency of information given out throughout the story.Story development: is very, very slow, again not a big deal, but the constant changing of basic information given out makes it very hard to follow and quite frankly quite tedious to read at times.Character design: I think the concept is good, and I really appreciate that the mc has for lack of a better word "normal" family life. But there's little to no interaction with others so far(50 chapters in, and we can count the people he's spoken to enough to warrant actual conversation text on 1 hand).Updating stability: I've given this full marks since I'm only 50 chapters in, and I don't know.World Background: Again I love the concept, I really do. I always appreciate a good system and the fact that there's a system for everyone not just mc (albeit not as extensive as the MCs but skills and rating exist for all as well as stones to absorb etc.)
it's like these stories want to keep sucking China's d.ick like all the country's attacked China to plunder them then one dude from China who is an old toast ended it with one simple trick and the amount of of times it says how great China is actually scarry like do people in China just get fed propaganda
A great story thats well written and easy to follow. Full of characters you want to know more about! I simply cannot wait for more. What other powers are there?
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