For now I really like this story. I wonder how it would develop further ?
Just not uploading constantly thats all rest is superb
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
I'm drowning in the amount of dialogues TT (I'm not used to it, sorry.)The chapters seem long too, which honestly, justifies the amount of uploads a month. So far, good potential for a comic maybe. would like to see how things develop ^^
I like how the author exhibits a penchant for lexical sophistication while maintaining a meticulously structured narrative that flows with admirable coherence. Events are woven together with an unpretentious yet perspicacious clarity, ensuring that each scene transitions seamlessly to the next. There’s a deliberate conciseness here an avoidance of superfluous embellishment that keeps the prose engaging and accessible. Yet, the subtle intricacies in phrasing and event linkage reveal a calculated precision, anchoring the reader without overwhelming them with verbosity.
Very catchy, the pacing is just right and I love the characters personalities! The plot itself is interesting so I'd love to see more.
Interesting. Waiting for more. All the best author
not bad i guess im gonna wanna continue ❤️
Warning: a scum and a rapist MC. Should have an evil tag in this novel. Can’t believe another good potential novel just to be ruined by MC’s character. Author loser character is mixing with his novel. Sigh ……
Very good novel espicially last chapter is awesome
Gives the vibes of too much revenge drama and you have me hooked up, update daily
Amazing writing, well-developed characters, and interesting plot twists that won't let you put the book down. If you are familiar with the same author's other works, you can expect a great story from the get-go. Give it a try and you won't regret it!