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I was really surprised on how soo many different concepts and ideas were used in this story. There's aliens, time travel, revenge, super powers in this story and even with soo much on the plate it feels it's been executed well. Yes, there are moments were it feels too fast or too much, but with such complexity in the story I would have been surprised if there weren't any such moments. But I do feel things can get a little slow for good at some parts. But with that aside, I feel the world building is really done greatly! It is really well written and it keeps me intrigued to read more! Keep up the good work author!
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The best HxH fanfic I've read so far. The author made the characters fit very well in the story and it added some fun while reading it. The node is new and well explained that it explain some differences in the original story. Good luck author and thank you for a great story.
Writing an updated review. Still loving this book for what it is. A light novel isekai at its best, with characters grounded somewhat in reality, a smart MC, and a dash of heart.
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I've read over a hundred chapters of this novel now. This is the type of monster MC you would either adore or hate. Why do I say this? This protagonist never truly becomes a dragon, at heart or soul, he will always be human. You could see this from each and every one of his interactions with sentient species; every time he inflicts harm upon them he would wallow in self-pity, guilt and philosophical debates (on the universe, life and death) for chapters on end. There's no growth to him as a dragon, whilst his power grows, his personality stays just as it was in chapter 1. Him living for years as a dragon doesn't change him a bit...which I find extremely disappointing.
I love the story and I would give it 5 stars if the Author thought a little bit more about the plot.Examples:spoiler:Tead at your own risk.A example is that trillionare who collapsed in debt.He could have just not paid, because he has a Nations backing so nobody could force him to.Or right now when the world has collapsed the Author makes it so that the past currency is still as important,when you cant even buy anything.Another example is that at one point in the story where the world system has already collapsed the MC cares that Ethan Grey ownes an Island.He could have just taken over a Island and nobody could have stopped him.
The only mistake I could see was Commas placing, nothing else. the words are well chosen and Raith who was expected for big got something that worth nothing (Dust of Death). a new type of power balance is very good, Archons bs Primordials. looking forward to it
I do like the MC determination and also the flow is dope?
Name MC: Lia haoIf that's not enough of a clue, then I'll say the story is an absolute waste of time and space. I don't understand why authors or translators use Chinese/Korean/Asian names, words and phrases in a story written in English, for a non-Asian audience. No person native to the mainland from America, Europe or Oceania relates well to Asian society and does not relate to its customs either; That is why it is said that Asia is another world.
Started really really well idk why but i love it (ashamed of myself) will come later to refix this if it get ban after some time cuz you never know with this type of novels hopefully it wont get droped