Seastar222
I don't like a trash mc ty....................
One of the best harem story with satisfying chemestry between characters. It also has a unique cultivation system for you to enjoy, so go ahead.
It could have been a great story but the author changes the mc to make it drag on longer, also simply. So the was the girl he could not implant the seed of the mind he did not her the first time, I understand why he did not kill her that time. But the next time is straight up simping if you can't control it, he should kill and take the power, instead of manipulating remotely simping. The are other problems what about all the demon powers and spells, they are only skills and weapons and tiles. You might erase what makes demons supreme. then the is the mentality of paying people back.So in total lots of potential if done correctly, but wasn't simping galore and erasing what makes a demon a demon.
I love your writing style and the english is well written!!!I can see that this story is going to be even more interesting!Keep it up writer??????
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I like the story a lot. The characters are well designed for the most part and the plot has steady progress. I would recommend this novel.
This novel starts up as the typical cultivation novel but big up to the author for planning out his cultivation system plus the novel is a slow build up living less room for mistake in the story line
Shameless request, but whatever. Please don’t turn this into a harem where the mc surprises all the bad guys and wins the hearts of all the maidens. I don’t want to see another story with potential become a harem novel that can only repeat the same thing over and over.
