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Writing Quality - GoodStory Development - GoodCharacter Design - WonderfulUpdating Stability - Don't KnowWorld Background - GoodI don't like the romance stuff, but this is something else, which makes people continue reading it. Loved It.
Really freaking good so far, I'm gonna continue reading this masterpiece. ?
Honestly speaking, it's an amazing novel. please read it. it's uniquely catered for everyone to enjoy.❤️
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Have a good story line! It was interesting and was a great read! Waiting for more ?
J'ai vu que tu es français donc je me permets de faire la critique dans cette langue.J'ai vraiment accroché à l'histoire, je trouve que tu as réussi à trouver un bon équilibre entre l'histoire/aventure et la documentation. Je me suis également attaché à Adam (j'aimerais bien avoir des pov de ses amis) et j'ai hâte de lire la suite.Merci pour le partage !
"Issei Hyoudou?" she said in disbelief
Never! Never!
"Didn't I already mention it earlier? Yes! Creating! We will create someone who is strong in the human world.
"So, you like to date a lot of women, don't you?" He asks.
But, suddenly I started to feel pain on my head. My eyes started to become cloudy.