waiting for next chapter eagerly please post it soon
I read this novel up to chapter 37 and all I can say is that this novel is awesome. Wall-made kingdom-building with come mostly from Mc's hard work. The book greatly shows the cultural differences in seeing the world by bee society and human one and the culture shock that comes from it and how hard sometimes is to adjust to a new group of people with so different way of seeing the world from you. Mc is amiable, he is not fearless but he won't let fear impact his decisions and he takes actions that may take his life but are necessary for him and all of his community to survive and prosper. He also knows a lot of things and doesn't rely only on his cheat to survive. Moreover, he is an excellent leader and hard-working person. The author shows us the hardship of living longer than your loved ones and our book hero's way of dealing with it. The other important character is interesting and well-made so the story isn't shallow, but the author could give more second-cast characters and improve the development of the existing one, but this could be made later. We do not know much about the world right now but there were happening so many things that this could be justified, but there is a need for one if this book wants to be as good as it is right now. As for updates, they are mostly regular. Overall this is marvelous work and it needs to be known to many more WN members. I can recommend it to any kingdom-building and non-harem likers out there who are searching for a good story to enjoy with a cup of tea.
The characters are where this story truly shines. They are deep, complex, and evolve in ways you won’t expect. Each one feels real, with their own struggles, desires, and growth arcs that make you root for them, even when they make mistakes. The main character, in particular, is someone you won’t soon forget—flawed, relatable, and downright inspiring.
An ambitious and gripping story with a rich supernatural world and compelling central conflict. With deeper exploration of characters, pacing adjustments, and expanded themes, this novel has the potential to be a standout in the urban/dark fantasy genre.
W story really enjoyed this as a someone's first story it was great. A solid journey of struggles with self-discovery, the character of Dalton felt really human, he has his flaws and it feels like it showed throughout the story. All the homies lowkey hate Vanessa though.
La trama es interesante, diferente a lo usual, aunque no me atrapó pues no es el género que acostumbro a leer.
So far the story has a lot of potential and I kinda enjoy the mc, I just hate the fact that during one of the beginning chapters he let himself get punched on the stomach and didn’t get revenge
Seems to be the beginning of something here
Action+mystery Romance+Dark+Fantasy......Just read few chapters now and I'm already hooked. Can't stopppp. This is definitely one of the best books I have read so far. Glad I found it. ❤️❤️❤️.
it's my first novel I'm not an expert and English is not my first language if you got ideas to make the novel better tell I also read the comments so if the readers don't like serting things do tell I will try to fix them
Nothing amazing, just another heavily edgy teenage anime concept mixed with half real characters. Story development is subpar, fight scenes are told not shown. Characters are sometimes real sometimes not.
When you told you're going to participate in a december WPC, i didn't expect you to participate for male leading fantasy category, and it's really well written?