I have no idea what this is. I just know its probably a master-disciple novel, and the MC will be old. That in itself already separates this novel from quite literally most anything on this website. That is why I want this to be chosen.
Even though it is only a translation work and not purely made by themself, it is still good and everyone should give it a try.MC is a villain, very scheming and is waiting for the bigger plot.
translation is bad. I'ts possible to understand it, but its clear its machine translated and edited. I'ts one of the better machine edits though, ill give it that. The plot and story isent too bad but nothing special. Not special enough to bother reading this edited machine translation.
Seems decent, sign-in kind of theme. any reviewers?-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Nice book. It needs support ........................................................................ ...................... .. . ... ..........
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I love your book dude, it has good passing, and awesome flow. I will learn from the way you write.
I really like this story especially how MC evolve with each contact with his past life personality. Besides, the plot of getting the maids is amazing, as well as growth of their relationship.
Actually, the book cover made me click on it :D But I've read 3 chapters and I have to say I'm enjoying it. The beginning was quite different than others I've read and also great. Keep it up ;)
Terrible Ending ruined everything ??Before the forced/abrupt ending it was actually decent. There were a few problems that made it a little rough around the edges but nothing that couldn't be solved in later chapters.
Well, the idea was good.. kind of.3 1/2 chapters in, and it was already kind of unbearable. It just seems like you have no clue what you’re doing, and need some time to improve.You want the main character to be sarcastic so bad that it just comes off as cringey, and this whole thing where the boys and school are picking fights over a girl, and even crying when they see her with the MC is quite honestly just gross, and unrealistic.
It has been a while since i wrote something and i hope i'll get some feedback to improve my writing. This story is something i wrote after reading a pretty large number of xianxia novel, i always hated the way those mcs go around collecting females like Pokemon and swinging their swords like retards at the first person who opens their mouth, creating a bigger problem and an enmity with a clan/sect, then repeats the same thing after 20 chapters.So yeah i'll be avoiding that.