i was reading "i am the fated villain" and now i came here to reread this one but i cant help but cringe in the 3rd chapter
i guess my mind got corrupted
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i swear i tried to continue reading but my mind got corrupted too much
i give up
Ik its getting kind of annoying now lol hes having sex in every single chapter now that you get to the end
This is the worst novel I had read so far,In the novel MC never become stronger than his enemy.He is all around in desperate situations where his women always on edge of being raped by enemy and he is virgin.What a terrible novel.......
Any plans for next update?????!!!Please update
Those people extremely cruel want to using Jiajia blood as cure. I hope all of them died. I'm so sad right now.ML and FL please survive
The story is good, but I feel like the MC is a little wishy washy when it comes to his humanity. He is written as a psychopath and this brilliant assassin, but at times he is illogically stupid. There's also the bit about him finding humanity, losing it, and finding it again at what I thought were unnecessary times. Personally, it just kind of made the MC feel artificial, not totally bad but not great either. I liked how the world building played out. I thought that it was well done with different factions and incorporating multiple facets from an apocalyptic world. I really only have two major critiques. Firstly, there are large parts where I feel there is a step forward in plot, five steps back with long info dumps or a random background story, and then a mad rush of 10 steps forward with plot. I'm sure there's a grand design, but there were whole chapters at times that I just skipped. There were definitely some plot twists that I never saw coming though coupled with some pretty entertaining dialogues as well. My second critique is mostly grammar. By no means is it bad, but there are times when the completely wrong word is used or an occasional character name switch. Again, not the worst, it would just sometimes break my flow. The story as a whole is enjoyable. Thank you for your hard work. I was honestly surprised on how fast you could push out content.
good writting..... best of luck for your book
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The story is typical but better than most 'villain' novel. Still there are some cons -
MC is a kind of sadist. He mostly uses rough ways to indulge in primal desires. I personally don't like it. Though he seems to care about two or three heroines but it still appears that he is just using them as a tool.
What's the meaning of this if you don't even sincerely care about an individual? I'm not saying that he should become lovey dovey or like a righteous and kind protagonist but still make it look he cares about someone. It'll make story somewhat interesting.
Though it's my personal opinion. I am not against the fact the MC forces himself upon some heroines or/and women but some women still deserve to be treated with gentleness.
And just control his lecherous and lustful nature. Don't make him surprised everytime he looks at new heroine and at other things too.
Your story is really nice. That is I give you five stars. Author keep writing your story everyday. I hope you will do your best.
Thank you......
I love reading novels that have a cold-blooded mc that doesn't mind getting his hands dirty, and this novel is just that.
The MC is calculating and cold, doesn't mind killing people to get what he needs and wants, and does some things that I didn't expect, so far, loving it.
God dude. Brain dead. The amount of face-slapping is dumb. Ao Cheng, the second character is so dumb that they try to justify it. I don't know how I got to chapter 122. It was a waste of coins tbh. The System this thing talks about doesn't appear for 50 chapters, and the choices the mc picks are bad. Don't waste your time on this one.