At times like this where Im too lazy to give a review I'll resort to spamIts good, Its good, Its good, Its good, Its good, Its great! Its a fantastic read.
Your novel has good things author. The style is fast-paced and straightforward, something really good in action scenes. It feels like a modern work, both in setting and as a literary work. Good job.However, sometimes it reads more like a journal, while others more like a short story. This inconsistency can make it sometimes a little tiresome and tedious to read. Try to stick more to one style. There are also some grammar mistakes like mixing grammatical tenses and missing plurals, but nothing that makes the story unreadable.Some few fixes and you're good to go. Keep working on it!
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I am giving it 5 stars for the synopsis itself! Keep updating so I can binge later! Join The Unnamed God Sect !!!!Join The Unnamed God Sect !!!!
The story is structure and Quality wise absolutely up there. Even if a few more position marker for scene changes would be nice. The bad rating has therefore only one major reason and that is the lack of the correct Tags for the story or a mention in the Description. I don't know at what point the story is to be comedy or Romance. All I found was, Tragedy, Heartbreak. As Beta Simp of an MC, depiction of Torture or Abuse. At no point do the Tags mirror this, i normally stay away from those story's because I don't like this over dramatic plot. So is the story bad? No for a Dark - Romance type of story it would be ok, but it not what I was locking for and not what I wanted
Overall, this story has an intriguing setting that sparked my interest right from the start. The author only has minor problems with grammar so it wasn't at all an hindrance towards readability.Can't wait to read more as I presume this might be the type of story where everything will slowly reveal itself through the course of time.Would recommend to readers of any caliber, since I am not a into the romance genre this still caught my attention. Please keep writing author.
never a delay in updating mister author??keep up the good work and I like the excellent description of characters ? looking forward to the adventure of monke and friends ❤️☺️
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