This book is flying way under the radar. Maybe because therE are only 90 chapters. But based on the foundation this will be a top 25 novel
One of the best novel I've ever read ,No !! It's the best it's #1 on my my list , the character development is good, all the girls have a story of their own ,character of their own and character development of their own ,the author didn't leave a space blank in the plot or character development of any female , and I can tell the author took reference from many novels to create his own characters which are very unique and don't overlap with other characters, I won't say the author is a genius cos it will be an insult to him cos he will way above that ,and one a level that can be called god-tier and I can say that the author has worked really hard penning down this novel ,and it's simple to read and it's focused of every reader around the world and it's easy to understand , the only thing I hate is that it became premium , right now I'm still free loading off my parents so I can't afford the premium chapters but next year once I start earning I will spend some money on this as a gratitude to the author for writing this wonderful novel and also support him and don't know what the future will be amidst this pandemic but I hope the author keeps writing and stays well and give a satisfying ending to this story and in turn satisfying his readers I have a lot to say about this novel but I just can't pick the perfect words to describe my feelings ,I love this novel very much and I thank author for this , I have never written such a long review for a novel ever cause I am very lazy at doing so but I could stop myself after reading this , ugggh I don't know what to say anymore , anyways thank you again author- San and keep writing ,by the way Satsuki is my most favourite character after akane ( akane is special after all) ....okay bye ?
So anyone wanna tell me how this and the other novel were picked for translation when they weren't even votable options?..................................
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Everythings good. But you know. This guy. He chuckles. Chuckles. Chuckles..... And... Chuckles and keeps on chuckling. Sometimes it's not just him. Yeah. They chuckles. And chuckles. Hmmmm. Anyway giid story. Could have better writing quality. Thats it. Keep it up. Love the story.
Too much dog food and that is what I love!Please more author!More of cultivation mystery and poison mystery and Lin HuaX Lord Xie Yang!!!Father is also good! thumbs upppp!
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you have an amazing attention to detail. i love the world you have built. Maybe try pulling at the reader heart, certain phrases or moments in his life.
So incredibly repetitive. All the girls are in love with the protag, all in the same way. Maybe it's just because it's too early, and you can very well say that, but I don't care.I would honestly prefer if it was something like a tragedy/psychological novel, where protag is alone in the world with no one on his side. It would be edgy and emo(probably), but I would still prefer that over this. Too bad such a novel doesn't seem to exist.So if you're looking for a casual, borderline brainless read, then this is for you.The grammers nice though. I haven't noticed any odd sentences at all. That's all you really need to know. The rest of this review was written by me for my own amusement. Read it if you want, but it's not good/helpful or polished.Short summary, basically protag had to act as a villain in a novel cuz a system wanted him to. However after dying he has to do it again for some reason. Here's the catch though, basically every single character thats female with a name fell in love with protag and got reincarnated.That's not even a joke. Every single female with a name. And the reasons they fell in love with protag aren't even that good either. Things how they've been watching him for years and fell in love. Don't get me wrong, if it's once or twice then it can absolutely be creative. When it's like 10 or whatever amount of heroines this stories going to have though, it just comes across as lazy.Who am I kidding. It's probably going to be like 1000 different heroines.Anyway, so they love protag. Not like a light crush or anything, but basically a yandere type thing. I'm not against yanderes at all, in some cases they're actually pretty nice, but it's kind of ridiculous here. Not sure why but they just irk me. Maybe it's because they're all the same in terms of how they love him. They hate the original mc of the novel(in fact they all conspired to kill him in their past life. One lady even sacrificed millions of lives to do it or something. That's just douchy. Like seriously. I'm going to go off on tangent so skip if you don't care. It reminds me of this other novel where the protag is a spy or something but he gets betrayed. He has a final card up his sleeve though, and that's to literally blow up bombs he's set everywhere. It doesn't even make sense. Like nuke level. Like demolish the entire world, killing billions in seconds. Why? To get back at like three people. It's so annoying. It's so lazy. The protag doesn't even feel regret as he floats in a sea of souls, murdered by him. Leaving aside how unrealistic it is, it's just so douchy. God that made me so mad. Honestly I've got a incredibly filthy mouth in terms of swearing, or at least used to(league of legends level), but I can't even use it. God.), and blindly love the protag.It's very noticable as well, at least to the protag. But just one word from the system and he lets it go.I don't feel like doing this review anymore, so peace.
it's too much bland in the sense characters,story,world background and the stage is almost always wrong which makes more confusing than it was already.Even if it was cliche i wouldn't have mind but it's like written in the form of summary of cliches story.And the mc doesn't even feel interesting, you can literally go at him for the kill but he won't kill only break your sword.. And also the cringe justice talk which makes no sense.
The translation is bad, but not illegible, but the way its written makes reading this so tedious. I generally despise the genre gamelit, systems, but give the fact that this was based on dnd I was keen to give it a try. Poor judgement on my part.I'm on chapter 126 and reading this is as engaging and entertaining as passing a kidney stone with the size and shape of a spike marble.