I got asked at chapter 134 to make a review and this is my review.Writing quality great.Story development is also great but it seems like you forgot the shop girl who is the only woman who got his mother's "acknowledgement".Character design is great except for the Mc's friends from the real world who I personally don’t want in the story. His harem and family is enough. The Mc is also to weak without his glove wich is the only thing I dislike about him.Current updating stability is 2 chapters every day and that is absolutely great.World background is interesting but Zach has said that he traveled to other realms with his father and he should have been able to train qi/mana there.The game is interesting but the lower floors are boring and you know it. You even made him go into a sea realm to make it a little bit more interesting.
Yea unexpectedly good. Different and unique. i like it cos it's not a cliche where u can predict like 90% of the chinese novel.Though i felt it was scary in some chapters
this is very good. I hope the story continues : . .
I never seen any novel that as detail as this even though some of the story is inspired by other but still not to concentrated on that part. anyway i just wanted to say i love this book and keep ip the work.
Translation turned to trash after 40 chapters
I quite like where this story is going. I think it can do better in various aspects, like descriptions or details, but I can't say much since I myself wouldn't know how to do better. As for free ideas, only comes to me adding some friendly animal characters; I believe you already set the base for it.I'll follow your work closely, as long as I can. good job!
Hello author, That was an amazing work. Highly recommend it to others. I am not a fan of video games novels. But I came here to give a review lol...I thought it was not good to leave silently.That's why I decided to appreciate this work.I hope the author will keep going giving the best. Lot of love from me to this work..????
Author here.I want to thank you all for the support, it means so much to me. Thank you.I see MVA as a very unique story because I did my best to improve my writing quality style, thought well about it before I began writing and every critique which was stated was worked on. Of course, if there are more, please feel free to let me know. And while they are only a few chapters and the release rate is not all that much, that's for a small amount of time. Also, the question of whether or not MVA will be a harem novel, I have always avoided that question because I assumed I was only spoiling things, but I'm going to let it out now, the answer is no. The MC will not have a Harem.A romance subplot and love interest is considered, but that's all, no Harem.Thanks for reading, and I hope to see you in the future.
Wonderful write up!❤️?? A game of dares that ends in a web of love! Definitely following it!❤️❤️ A ridiculous dare game between three clowns. ❤️I dare you to be nice ❤️?????
It has been a month or so since I last read this because I was waiting for more updates, so I could spam read for a while. When I was last here I don't believe it had a "harem" tag? Which I could've not seen and was just curious if this was a recent change because I loved the world this author created as well as the story. The M.C. seems to be kind and loyal especially to those who are loyal to him. I also really like the M.C.'s characteristics, however I'm not really into anything related to "harem" tags in stories. I am continuing to read and hope that it's something I can at the very least deal with in the story. Thank you for the time and effort you put into making this novel.
Great Novel I Hope the author uploads more soon. I still think Ronald should have MCdonald's last name instead of Kuangge. Did a good job!!!!!
my old review was deleted (I think I gave like 2.7 stars) this time I will not take an hour of my time to write an in-depth review. Why should I? This story is bad and it is getting worse over time, earlier chapters (until 100) are pretty good and promising. But at some point the author has stopped trying to write a good story and focused on writing as much as possible. The focus shifted to earning money which is TOTALLY FINE. But he sadly disregarded proofreading and story telling which is NOT FINE.