Anymore chapters? Its been stuck @ chpt 353 for a couple months already. Author are you ok? Am waiting patiently for The no stop readIng on this book, pls update soon.
Well I got to the chapter that is released for free so I will give an honest criticism about this story.About the world: history has much to explore, since in 39 chapters the protagonist has not yet left his tower to explore and is only aware of practically two races that appeared near his tower.Based on that, history still has a lot to offer and explore.Development of the Story: the protagonist carries with him a tower leveling system (which is not very weak but is also not OP) where practically everything the protagonist will do will revolve around this tower system.The flow of the story progresses very slowly where the problem that the protagonist has with the werewolves in (Chap. 2) has not been even close to solving in (Chap. 39).I believe that the biggest problem in this story is the first 10 chapters where it appears that some details are missing or that something was skipped.Example chapter 1 itselfThe protagonist takes everything as if it were the logic of a game (where it gets to be irritating at a certain point) and also the protagonist's own attitudes are quite questionable. Your decisions and attitude makes you wonder if the protagonist really has an ***** mindset.In short, a cowardly protagonist with a sense of inferiority who apparently never goes to hand his women.2/5 star in character just because of the incompetence of the protagonist.Details aside: the story is from Harem where in 39 cap the protagonist already has 4 girls. The story also has a lottery system (Gacha) very seen in a mobile game so the protagonist must get more allies (girls) from that system.
I am not too sure about what to say about it but I thought it deserved to get a rating like this. But I need to have something down here in order to review it so here it is.
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story is... okay.however, there is absolutely no logic and some obvious gaps in the story.no background for mcevents that happen dont follow logic or science yet no mention of magicyou were warned.
Woah. The sypnosis is short but too strong. The author can easily captured the reader's hearts by just reading the sypnosis. The first chapter is well written. I love how the author wrote the storyline. Keep it up!
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I don't understand why there are so pitiful no of proper reviews. The plot is engaging, the whole background and premise are well planned to give a sense of intrigue, all characters have a "brain" to think(including side characters and enemies), mc never thinks with his lower half, and even side characters have character development(ofc mc has some moments as well but the story is currently in development stage) and every single character has a personality( no filler characters just to be there to provoke mc). I urge everyone to give it a try and see for themselves. Thank you author, for the amazing novel and keep it up.
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