Great story so far I like how you describe the beginning, like we were watching the begining of Like a movie or something, you do really good on showing how the character feels and acts, the only mistakes I can see are some minor spelling ones, so keep up the hard work and I hope to reed more of this!
well everything is all over the place........................................................................................................
I think the novel is not bad, we can see how much effort from the author on giving us the details even lots of things missed here, but so far I enjoy to read this
The romance is immaculate. 10/10.
Great book with interesting story. The powerlevel of the MC follows an exponential curve, starting from zero and picks up massive speed - while still feeling "reasonable".
The writing quality is good, updates are stable, the story is captivating, the characters are interesting and the background is presented to the reader through the story step by step naturally.
Well done!
sorry bro I can't even start reading the book because of the synopsis It's as if it is a Chinese young master novel.I will not comment anything on the novel as I have not read it,but I suggest changing the synopsis
Tired with this same storyline repeated over and over again but then again, considering the quality of books being released on trial read these days I'll just go with this one
This is great! Sect building with a bunch of nice brats it’s very good slice of life stuff.. plus there’s a cute little fox ?
The book has really bad grammar and the MC is extremely arrogant which gets him into bad scenarios .
So before I delete this novel from my library purely because I do not want to see the cover again I wanted to tell you to delete that cover because it is horrible, atrocious, I mean if I saw that cover on my first time using Webnovel I would delete the app it looks like it’s made for children delete it
nice storyyyy ? interesting ...all the best
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