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was reading a cultivation novel and one of the comments say we should get a mc who is the heavenly dao and now here I the great Dargon meet this destined shi% by scrolling randomly. LET THE GAME BEGIN
This novel is well written and carries the reader along.
Let me say that I've read up to chapter 148, and so far, I'm loving this story. The characters are well thought out, and each chapter makes you want more. I will definitely continue to read until the very end.
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This novel is one of those kinds that you can (in my case) listen to for hours. The pace is steady and the writing is smooth. I miss knowing a little more about the character's feelings (I'm on chap 21), but in the other hand the world-building is great (only sometimes the names for stuff are kinda confusing and get in the way of immersion but it's not often). Long story short, it has a great start and a steady development. Keep it up Author ;)
I want moooooooooooooooooooooooooooore chapters
This heaven like novel deserves to go on. Keep updating it, author-nim. I love your works, so keep it up.
Layla is a delight and Mary is a menace to come by. I wonder what else will happen
There's this one moment that's been haunting me since I finished reading. Su Nuannuan sits down to a meal and eats like her life depends on it—because it does. The narration is almost clinical: "Chopsticks moved swiftly across the table, the only sound the crisp clinking of utensils against bowls." No dialogue, no inner monologue. Just the sound of someone eating. And then Ji Xiao does something that completely recontextualizes everything. He takes her leftover dishes and pours them into his own bowl. Not a word. Just... eats what she left. The author writes it like a whirlwind sweeping away remnants. This man, a Regiment Commander, someone with power and status, finishes the food of the girl his family abused for eight years. I keep coming back to the orphan parallel the text draws: "In her previous life, she had been an orphan, never knowing where her next meal would come from, growing up hungry. In this life, she was also an orphan. Though she had a place to stay, she had never eaten a full meal in her life." Two lives. Two forms of hunger. The first was poverty; the second was something worse—having a roof but being starved anyway. The Ji family gave her a place to exist but never let her live. Eight years of being a "free servant." The food at that state-run restaurant isn't just food—it's the first time in her combined lifetimes that someone is *serving* her instead of making her serve. And the system's physical transformations? The chest developing, the skin clearing, the brown spots vanishing—that's not just a beauty upgrade. It's the body reclaiming itself. The original host's body was a site of neglect, and now every point she earns is a small act of resurrection. She's not just surviving; she's becoming someone the world can't ignore. The kiss scene is grotesque and hilarious and tragic all at once—she's counting kisses like currency, treating his lips like an ATM. But underneath the comedy, it's about agency. She's using the only tool she has to buy her freedom. What does that say about a world where a woman's body is the only thing she can trade?
???❤️❤️❤️❤️ love this story, it may not look like it but it's very interesting!!!!
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An interesting novel, the character development is good with nice and interesting plot and story line, I highly recommend this novel to read.
