this is so niceee! pls update more chaps ?
Will there be romance?
This probably got picked because the mtl is already readable so the entire book can be easily edited to milk money.Anyways it goes even more cringe with the bashing of other countries like Korea, Japan, Western countries, etc. You know how Chyna Numba 1 stories go.Ignoring that, there are literally no compelling characters. MC is basically emotionless for the reader to project on to, and all the side characters are beautiful women. Gets old and tiring really quickly. Villains are literally cardboard cartoon cutouts. In fact the MC is a better villain than the actual villains with how he acts (ie: psychopathic and sociopathic).
update stories please ,I enjoyed the sequence of the story
So far so good. Nothing really to complain about. All very positive results. Not to fond on the MC being betrayed by his loved ones but that's just me personally. The idea is good and it's a good start to the novel. Looking forward to seeing what this novel will become. Hopefully not too much betrayal. Would be cool to see some guilty individuals who regret what they did instead of being the heartless twits that are so commonly seen on this platform. Other than that, I'd say it's a good start.
so the story has great talent, no doubt, with the way you keep writing and the daily update. in time, this book will come to be among the greatest of novels.
I am so engross in this is an extraordinary work of creativity.. It draws one in and gets one trapped.. I am trapped. I can't wait to see how Ken will end with his dual nature ànd the author has done well to lay good background to raise the curiosity of any beta reader.I love this...Kudos to this amazing author.