PervertedDaoist
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The story itself isn't bad but there seems to be a lot of forced interactions with the different characters that makes the story feel rigid. The MC "forgetting" that people are around when using his "secret" abilities is another problem with the story. Its really unfortunate because it kept me from truly getting attached to any characters since all interactions seemed out of place. An easy example is Connor the person he met during a raid that he "accidentally" showed his repair function to. Somehow Connor didn't even react and MC trusted that he wouldn't reveal his secrets and continued to reveal more of what he could do. The way he reacts to things just doesn't make much sense and it's rough having a dumb MC sometimes. There are also some inconsistencies early on with levels and the stats he gets per level but thats not as important if youre not looking to immerse yourself in the story. I will continue to read the story but as of now these are some pretty bad flaws.
Exact copy of Beautiful CEO, The only difference is their name. WTF can you at least change the plot somehow, or change the character personality maybe, but no. Our author might be think that My Beautiful CEO is a great novel that He copy the exact same situation into this novel. Dont read it, dont waste your time, At least some crappy face slapping novel out there trying to be innovative by changing the plot somehow. But This!!!!!! Nope
I liked the beginning a lot because I felt that there was a lot of good translation and there was even the exciting plot development which made me look forward to the future
