I am new with cultivation kind of stories and I can say that it is really kinda hard for me to sink in but when I read some chapters, okay, so this is the story. I understand. The development, the terms you are using are amazing and the characters development. Geez, good job!
I will start reading after 100 chapters are released (by the way I am from discord)
Unique super galing ng writer i thought it just a normal story na nababasa lang and familiarity but it isn't super cool ng gumawa i hope madami pang ma release yung writer I've waiting for the 2nd Chapter
Thank you for all these free chapters. I'm very grateful for your hard work. The only problems are how you often mix up genders and names, and also quite a few grammatical errors. However, the translation is still wayyy better than MTLs out there.
Very nice World Background!!Character design is very good.i like the story and im waiting for new Volumes!I like how the MC gets so much powerful.
The story has a lot of potential, and I'm enjoying the world and character development so far, however the pacing in the first nine chapters feels a bit slow, particularly due to the detailed synopsis, which reveals too much of the plot upfront. Thiss somewhat diminishes the element of surprise and makes it feel like the real story doesn’t begin until the pact with th primordial Chaos. Anyway I'm looking forward to seeing where the author takes this…
Just started reading and would like to see more.
it's pretty good for a guy who is a newbie like me.
THIS ONE IS FOOTBALL, what else do i need to say? In fields of green where dreams collide,A sacred space where hopes reside.The whistle’s call, the roar, the cheer,A symphony of passion loud and clear.The ball—a sphere, a world, a flame,The heartbeat of this timeless game.It dances free on feet so fleet,A story told with every beat.The striker sprints, the keeper dives,A moment’s pause, a goal arrives.A crowd erupts, the sky ignites,A celebration in the night.Defenders stand like walls of stone,Protecting all they’ve ever known.Midfield maestros weave their thread,With every pass, the game is fed.This game, it binds us, far and wide,No border, no wall, can stem its tide.In joy, in sorrow, it finds its place,A universal human embrace.So here we gather, young and old,To watch the stories yet untold.With every tackle, pass, and score,The beautiful game unites once more.Watch as young BEN take over the world with his brilliance
I like this book. I would like a little insight into Ravenna's mother and why her "father" turned on her. I am also curious where her being a silver wolf comes in. I have had to re- read a couple of places like" it sent spill down my back"And quite a few sentences are not cohesiveness written in English. It seems like it was in Spanish first then English where the action first. I would like to read more However.
The Storyline is so captivating ❤️ above all so Refreshing.
The narrative is gripping, with vivid descriptions and well-developed characters that make the story both relatable and inspiring. The author masterfully balances moments of triumph and heartache, leaving readers reflecting on what it truly means to pursue glory.