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I generally never write reviews, however, this novel truly truly irritated me. I had such high hopes - expecting various business elements (like those in God of Money) but all we get is a ‘misunderstanding clown fiesta’. Emphasis on the clown fiesta. Conflict (singular) in chapters 1-100 could have been solved in under 5 chapters had anyone decided to use even 5% of their brain. Its all set up to show that everyone besides the MC is a gold digger while building on some really unrealistic power-trips and lackluster (and equally unrealistic) revenge plot.I’d love to nitpick but its honestly not even worth the effort. Just use this review as a benchmark and save some time. [Dropped at Ch 100]
at around chapter 230 the story gets completely ruined, the story suddenly changes and everything makes no sense anymore, there's so many missing plot points, things get mentioned that never hhappened, characters go missing like they never existed in the first place. characters that have been in the story since beginning suddenly change and are unrecognizable anymore. for example the first disciple was a mortal cultivator which doesn't have any realms and doesn't rely on physiques, but then all of a sudden the eldest disciple has this heaven defying physique and he's also apparently in Emperor realm. and then they talk about how all of his disciples are in Emperor realm, which doesn't make any sense because before the sudden change there was only 1 disciple in Emperor realm, and on top of that if other had reached that realm the Mc shouldn't have known because they've been in a completely different world the whole time and there was no indication that they ever went back to the main world, so it should be impossible for them to have ever seen the other disciples let alone know their realm. The whole story is all messed up and ruined, and I thought it would fix itself after a few chapters but no, I went through over 70 chapters after the mess up, and it's still not fixed and I doubt it will ever be. So I'm dropping this story, and I recommend you all to not even bother reading it because if you actually enjoy it and you reach halfway you will just be completely disappointed and drop it anyways. Don't waste your money reading it
The synopsis is Interesting, i hope it's actually a good novel................,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,., ,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
I like the review and the comment. Just getting started..... I believe it going to be a great novel couple with the cultivation stuff.???
I really like this new version than the old one for many reasons:1 Less nonsensical dialogue of the MC2 More stable personality of the MC3 Good flowthe rest are just minor issues, anyways, i still love thisKeep up the good work, AuthorLove you from the bottom of my Blood Dimension❤️❤️❤️
there are some wrong grammar and typos, but its good the story but dont rush it i feel like the events are too fast, it has an interesting story, keep up
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Nickaido's here with Crimson Overlord and obviously I'll give myself a five stars. I will try to make this novel enjoyable so please collect it and support me through your comments and suggestions.
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The novel is well written. Also the updates are good, though the title is misleading. The MC should be a prince and soon to be king which the MC doesn't act nothing like one. The author has failed to portray the MC as a king. Second is where is the MC guards? all kings have many guards, palace knights or something. Like really MC only has one guard to guard him? Where is MC arrogance he is at the top of HIS kingdom. Why is the author trying to make the MC make government like the UK, USA author should experiment an make his own type of government. It also feels to me that the author is making the MC into a simp, beta slowly or a goody hero with perfect morals that will do everything right without making any mistakes an not letting his power get to his head or something.
bro why did u stop writingcome back and continueI can't wait to know the story further
I love this book I really do I have been reading it sense it was in Royal Road. I like you very much but lately, most of you two chapters have been kind of short not in one of the reason I know this novel so much is because of his long productive chapters that I can play something not small chapters that does nothing but further the story with no point that's why has a fan in a reader I would like you to bring back your long chapters I'll pay the stones for them I just don't like to show chapters.
