I really liked the novel, atleast until the newest chapter where there is ntr, normally I would give this 5 stars but the ntr ruined everything
this novel was dropped. don't bother reading it now.
It's decent, Off too a good start, but I have no worries, but seeing the author's other works I know for sure it has potential, so author keel going, also, that man is too rash bruh. thanks for the good book author san
These types of novels are my favorite because not only do they have an op main character but this one has cultivation and system. These both are considered favorite by this young master. The story looks pog, waiting for more.
El mismo autor dándose 5 estrellas. La novela me gusta y creo que es interesante de escribir, no sé cómo será aceptada en los lectores puesto que muchos probablemente hayan leído los otros Fanfics que he escrito y la hayan comparado, como sea, espero que al menos le guste a una persona y me deje comentarios. Literalmente empecé a escribir esta novela y continúe con otra, porque vi un comentario de un lector que decía algo como "Amigo sigue con la novela está muy buena!" y sólo por eso me dió ánimos para seguir escribiendo... Qué mentalidad tan cutre y simplista, suspiro, pero bueno, así soy.
nice plot and intriguing characters, over the story has great story and can't wait for more
I have read 260/270 chapters by the time I made this review.
Absurb power ranking from dead object to dozen universe destroying God (not sure why the need to destroy multiple universes just to test their power, it is such nonsense like how many trillions creatures they killed for that).
Super slow story development, like my god it was slower than a sloth. Most chapter only filled with skills grinding nonsense and some random dimwit moments.
Characters are outright retard, like even the God are no exception. So much slow connection, confusion, and blank mind like you will wonder if anyone even have any normal working brain.
Little to none world building, 260 chapters in and the story still in 1 kingdom (no detail explanation), few locations (no detail explanation) and few retarded so called inheritances (a bit more detail). The world is barren except for living stick, stone, some slimes, some humans and some energy beings. Like the author did not bother to add any animals, let alone proper ecosystem.
Overall 2/10 for me.
Amazing story so far just a bit confused with his abilities are what level they are.try to write an auxiliary on the ignisis abilities.cant say much about the world background but it's only the start.And if your having writers block just read novels or manga that revolve around animal or best evolution.keep up the good work.
Good work author. The book is quit detailing and religious and good timing. But I was just getting into the book...like I typed, good story line. I loved that she did not just bagged the job thing very real life-y. Tumbs up author.
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I don't usually write reviews but this novel better than most other on the website.It is pretty good for passing time .the story development is pretty steady with enough action packed in . The mc is pretty level headed and decisive in his actions
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