I love it, Elena the hunter with more enemies, I would have never thought Titus was that in the first chapter, it's engaging weldone, nice one, I enjoyed it, both Liam part, Elena and the boss Titus and Balxer,.
The Concept is fresh and Unique, Its a good set up for an Isekai novel, and i‘m hoping It delivers in the next chapter
as a daoist of culture, I want to say just one thing about this story
starting chapters like 1,2,3 were good but afterwards ... well how should i put it.. they were confusing but form the 19th chapter the writing quality story design and etc has improved significantly and I'm looking forward for next chapters
Good start...
as of 7 chapters all I can say that it has ridiculously good grammar and a unique concept. I'm sure the power system would be great, but only if it was explained, I might be saying this too early cuz he might explain it later, but I feel that if he told it later that it would be too late. I feel like the author is skipping a lot of scenes, cuz a lot of the flow doesn't feel natural, like him meeting basically god to just ending up in a baby body being tortured, or a fight that was about to ensue and next chapter has basically forgotten about it. the synopsis is useless, cuz I'm ch 7 and the only thing that has appeared from the synopsis is the name Michael, he wasn't even a game developer
Fucking amazing plot love it, it might be getting a bit too meta in the newest chapters but I’ll wait to see how it turns out. The differences between the hosts virtual world and others normal worlds is a bit confusing so more info on that would be good, but the rest is great. Now when it comes to the MC, I’ll just say I don’t like him. Even if he is ten he is pretty dumb and naïve, while also being greedy, uncaring, and weak willed. I thought the system would knock some sense into him but that’s didn’t happen, he is still not standing up for himself either to his “friend” (bully) or to his father. I get the father since he is a kid and in that case the mom should be the one to deal with that situation, but the bully is clearly a bad influence and the system did and said nothing about it. Overall I don’t like the MC who seems to be going down a depressing path. I don’t read books to be depressed and sad, I guess I should have known better and read the tragedy tag before reading but let me know if this situation is going to result in a tragedy or will it be stopped before that. For now I’ll drop, but I’ll might check later to see if the mc stays ignorant and keeps making the same mistakes or if he’ll stop before it is too late.
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I liked it but it's not his best work!!!
So let's get some of the biggest stuff out of the way. Within 50 chapters our MC is OP. If you like that kind of thing, that's fine. For me, I like a slow burn. If by chapter 50 I have a character throwing around literally millions of coins to buy any solutions to problems that come their way, even to the point of resisting a holy nuke, that's going to be a drop for me. I've only gotten to chapter 50. Apparently from the other reviews it eventually becomes a novel of just stomping big bads on other planets and dimensions. Even though all the worlds are converging on Earth? I dunno. Let's get to the meat of this review. Gammer and mistakes sometimes take me out of it, but I can ignore a lot of it. The story feels like a mix of a bunch of reincarnation/apocalypse novels. Again, not a deal breaker. I'm really sad about the unique twist that has kinda fallen by the wayside. Apparently, fallen angels (the main antagonist) have recruited large swaths of humanity to betray their kind for power and have them cement their power over humanity. This is why humanity is very weak in the future. Great twist, love it. But we already have an item that can find traitors easily. Even it's drawback is negated because our MC can just spend coins to solve it. So, no need to worry. This is why I've rated the story development so low because. Already we've tossed out a big challenge for our MC. Not even death can pose a problem, because our MC literally just bought extra lives. And can do so whenever they want. As for character design, MC is pretty bland. A step above some of the worst I've read, but quickly becoming the 'smartest, most handsome, strongest' man and that's it. Again, if you like that, this story is for you. Just not for me. Now, if you want a story to be able to sink your teeth in, no worries. There's TONS of content. That's a positive of this story. But at the end of the day, it's just another OP MC with no depth to them defeating the apocalypse with a wave of their hand while the girls swoon. Oh, and with a few slurs thrown in. Because of course.