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It's been so long since I find gold , I guess I'll be going in and out of webnovel app again ,let's see if the author could portray seduction well fr kekw
The story has potential, though the author obviously has barely any knowledge on formula racing. First of all, how is he racing without an FIA license. Second is he's basically a pushover. Then he goes breaking laws of physics with magical overtakes against vehicles almost twice as fast as his s*itbox.The list goes on and on with inconsistencies.
The work of this fic is nice and really good to read. As a suggestion, It would be awesome to have more interaction with the Rookie 9.
The writing quality is above average for the platform with many in-depth descriptions and an expansive vocabulary to supplement this. The characters are believable with their own personalities (however this is mostly shown through their actions and inner thoughts which is my next point). Much of the book details actions and exposition. There is a sufficient amount of dialogue, however it's not overloaded with it as many readers may be used to. It's a good read so far, though I can't say any advice regarding cliches and whatnot because I'm not a cultivator novel enthusiast. Still, I'd urge you to give it a try. :)
I've been through chapter one already, and I think this is the continuation of Reborn as the Demon Queen's Personal Chef, I love it already and can tell the storyline is really promising. I loved Part 1, btw?
Usually,I am not a fan of system novels, but this book has sparked my curiosity and I ended up reading. It was totally worth it!!! The plot itself appears promising and the characters are well written. The story develops through the main protagonist, Zach.. Instead dumping every information all at once.The story literally gives light to the journey of Zack to an orphan through a great warrior. Author have a pretty good command over the language and explains the story in simple terms, (which I haven't seen on other system novels) Kudos to the author, keep up the good work ???
I usually don't review or comment, butI read the novel until 735 and I have to say the novel is trash.The mc hasn’t developed at all. Honestly feels like he got worse, and I’m losing brain cells from reading this.The romance feels like “my three wives are beautiful vampires” but 20 times worse.Some side characters are also okay, but theThe main characters are poorly designed and dumb af.The only good factor throughout the novel is the system and the cultivation system.Only read this far cause people said mc developed, but imma let you know that he didn’t develop at all.But at the end of the day, it's my opinion, you can try it out yourself.
"-----------n." A faint but pretty sound fills the void.
"You stupid cunt why can't you do anything right" My mother Joanne yelled at me.
The girl in her potato-sacks looked up at me with big wide eyes.
"The truth is, I forgot that today is my birthday"