Interesting title for the book and interesting book cover
So far, it seems like a good read. However I am just getting started. I will revisit this review after reading more.
Hello dear Author! First I would like to say, that you have created an amazing story. I am exceedingly thrilled, thinking of where you will take this in the future. I gave every category 5 stars, except update stability. Now, I am not one to complain without first considering a solution. May I propose doing a release one day of the month, and you could drop four big chapters. Heck maybe even five, if it was a good month lol. This way we as readers could receive more stability. Thank you again for this wonderful story! Keep up the great work. Respectfully,A Big Fan
Got me interested. Has potential. Keep it up. ??
Hi. The author here. This is a based of a world I have been creating for a long time. Gonna publish at least 3000-4000 words a week so be expecting 2-3 updates a week at first at least. I know my writing is the weakest part of my novel, but I am extremely happy to get criticism since I want to improve on the parts I am lacking so if you find a grammar mistake can you tell me what mistake and where? It might be a one I didn't just spot or is just a mistake I have been repeating a lot.Thank you all
looks like smth i would love imma give it a shot.
The first chapter has me hooked, Amazing writing and interesting story so far. 5 Stars!
Great work. Keep it up. I like the way of the mc's character development. It felt right and whole. Also the descriptions are decent. Thanks for the chapters!
"Carl enough! Look at this." The doctor showed me a picture that I was very familiar with.
It's the person inside the room who opened it, as i look up i saw more of that person,. Its a girl.
"iya rena hati-hati ya.nanti ada yang godain loh" kata bg hendri, karena cuman bg hendri yang ramah, klau bg yogi jangan ditanya dia mah cuek, tapi karena cueknya itu la yang membuat aku tertarik.
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