As my seniors before me, I too must follow tradition (peer pressure from the past).Customary five star review here.Tell me what you guys find off about the story and how it can be fixed.
one thing about this novel that bother me is the updates cant you like update 2 chapter a day? But the rest is wonderful specially the character description and the details to the surroundings
Great novel. Interesting plot! Waiting for next chapters!
the only thing I have to say is that this author has the right to have the confidence to only say to read the first chapter and you'll be hooked on it so I guarantee you'll be hooked on it as well
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When his eyes adjusted to the light, he checked himself for any injuries and found that there was a mild pain in his neck. He got up and looked around the room and saw that there was no furnishing in the room. The floor was made up of a special white tile which exuded bright white light., the same as the walls. The ceiling was made of glass and there were air vents present on the top of the wall.
Even so, we can still watch over them with our Magic Eye. Magic that can hear and see them from our earthly land or the sky for them.
"Carl, you killed your own parents."
"Oh boy, I'm not the one who will--"
[Friends]
"But, she smiled..."
Excited, scared I don't know how to feel